The New Intimacy

Screen Writers Club- April 21, 2011 at 5pm EST

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Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
OK I am not going to do a meeting wrap up post since I need this to be something checked in on by the club members. I'll be posting some dialogue on the ideas as it moves along. Unless you think it would be easier to open a new forum post about the work in progress, Sam.
This could actually be easier than scrolling through the meeting notes to get to the new post.
04/21/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
Quote:
Originally posted by ToyTimeTim
Good start, I will add when I get a chance. About how long do we want them?
3-4 minutes tops
04/21/2011
Contributor: ToyTimeTim ToyTimeTim
Quote:
Originally posted by Airen Wolf
You know we could make this a mentor talking to a student just as easily. It loses some of the punch but would be easier to identify to for most people.
Agreed, it COULD go either way. Since we have a good start, maybe we should change it to the mentor deal and go with it. ???
04/21/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
Quote:
Originally posted by ToyTimeTim
Agreed, it COULD go either way. Since we have a good start, maybe we should change it to the mentor deal and go with it. ???
That's what I thought too. I opened another forum for actual dialogue writing. We'll keep this one for idea generating.

Here's an idea: We can use crash test dummies for a skit about toy safety....
04/21/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
For the Obama skit: "I ask myself, and my country...Can we use anal lubricant? YES WE CAN!"

Clinton: "Those are NOT silicone lube stains on her dress...I used maximus!"
04/21/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
Quote:
Originally posted by Airen Wolf
That's what I thought too. I opened another forum for actual dialogue writing. We'll keep this one for idea generating.



Here's an idea: We can use crash test dummies for a skit about toy safety....
Two beat up dummies

#1: We test some very dangerous sexual practices and we have come up with some very simple rules

#2 Toys without a flared base are not meant to be used anally!

ECT. We could even pull examples off the forum about toy safety if we can find it.
04/21/2011
Contributor: Woman China Woman China
I am so sorry Airen!!!! I fell asleep! Six days of waking in the ridiculous wee hours of the morning... I thought I'd be able to do one more!!! I'll take a read through
04/21/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
Quote:
Originally posted by Woman China
I am so sorry Airen!!!! I fell asleep! Six days of waking in the ridiculous wee hours of the morning... I thought I'd be able to do one more!!! I'll take a read through
Awww hun get some rest the forum will be up for you to peruse later! I will give you plenty of time to help write dialogue and come up with topics.
04/21/2011
Contributor: Vaccinium Vaccinium
FWIW, I nominate Lady Muffy Pussington as one of the characters' names.
04/21/2011
Contributor: ToyTimeTim ToyTimeTim
Quote:
Originally posted by Airen Wolf
That's what I thought too. I opened another forum for actual dialogue writing. We'll keep this one for idea generating.



Here's an idea: We can use crash test dummies for a skit about toy safety....
Good idea for dialogue. Link for the new thread?


Awesome idea for the crash test dummies! Love it.
04/21/2011
Contributor: Kindred Kindred
Quote:
Originally posted by Vaccinium
FWIW, I nominate Lady Muffy Pussington as one of the characters' names.
I nominate Vaccinium for the other
04/21/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
Quote:
Originally posted by ToyTimeTim
Good idea for dialogue. Link for the new thread?





Awesome idea for the crash test dummies! Love it.
New thread
04/22/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
Quote:
Originally posted by Kindred
I nominate Vaccinium for the other
SO is Lady Muffy Pussington mentoring Vaccimium or vice versa?
04/22/2011
Contributor: Vaccinium Vaccinium
Quote:
Originally posted by Airen Wolf
SO is Lady Muffy Pussington mentoring Vaccimium or vice versa?
In my experience, Muffy has total control over what Vaccinium can and cannot do, so.....
04/22/2011