OMG, I can't believe this stupid apt complex I live in, they just shoved a note in our door about kids molesting and abusing the ducks! Where the hell are their parents?
#Workshop - June 29th @ 9pm - Grammar Workshop
06/29/2011
I just ordered my Pikilo!!!!!
06/29/2011
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I am doing the same thing. I got a new webcam and did all 3 of my video reviews last night, only to find out that they didn't record because the software sucks.
Originally posted by
Jul!a
I'm working on a few reviews while I wait. I keep buying things when I shouldn't be, so I'm trying to knock out as many reviews on things I have sitting around as I can, lol.
06/29/2011
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Ooh awesome! You're going to love it! Which color did you pick?
Originally posted by
sexyintexas
I just ordered my Pikilo!!!!!
06/29/2011
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Molesting the ducks??? Messing with them...lol
Originally posted by
Wondermom
OMG, I can't believe this stupid apt complex I live in, they just shoved a note in our door about kids molesting and abusing the ducks! Where the hell are their parents?
06/29/2011
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The purple, I like it because its not the normal purple, more muted. I can't wait!!!
Originally posted by
Antipova
Ooh awesome! You're going to love it! Which color did you pick?
06/29/2011
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umm I think from the letter its more than just annoying them poor ducks
Originally posted by
sexyintexas
Molesting the ducks??? Messing with them...lol
06/29/2011
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Meh, some people are going to think it's rude, but these are most likely the same people that think that their reviews are awesome no matter what anybody else says and don't want to make them better half the time. I've only run into that once or twice, but I think that something like that is no worse than the links to the mentor program. So long as you phrase it in a nice enough manner, it should come across like the constructive criticism that it is.
Originally posted by
Antipova
Huh. Unless that's rude. It's always tough for me to tell, because personally, I like it when people give me ways to improve---but there are definitely people who don't.
06/29/2011
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Ooh, anything good?
Originally posted by
Wondermom
I just put in a new order earlier lol
06/29/2011
they are pointing out that its a class 4 felony, so I am pretty sure its a whole lot more than just annoying them and chasing them.
06/29/2011
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PIKILO!!!! I have been waiting for the free gift to change but I just couldn't wait any more, lol!
Originally posted by
Jul!a
Ooh, anything good?
06/29/2011
Alright everyone, let's get rolling! I know it is just barely 9 but I have quite a few good things to discuss, and I want to make sure I can get it all in !
I plan on discussing things from how to start writing, to writer's block and commas/sentences/ misspelled words.
I also realize that no one is perfect and we all make mistakes, I still have problems with commas and those em dashes myself. The goal of this workshop is to a) help everyone better understand some common aspects of writing and b) provide a place for reviewers to refer to (or refer others to) for help.
Any questions/concerns/top ics of discussion?
I plan on discussing things from how to start writing, to writer's block and commas/sentences/ misspelled words.
I also realize that no one is perfect and we all make mistakes, I still have problems with commas and those em dashes myself. The goal of this workshop is to a) help everyone better understand some common aspects of writing and b) provide a place for reviewers to refer to (or refer others to) for help.
Any questions/concerns/top ics of discussion?
06/29/2011
Hey, everyone! I'm here! However, I am multitasking, so, I may be in and out a bit. And kids molesting the ducks? I'm sorry, I know I shouldn't, but I'm lmfao!
06/29/2011
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sliquid sample size, my first plug a vibe, the free gift and free eden bullet
Originally posted by
Jul!a
Ooh, anything good?
06/29/2011
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I'll sit down and do all of my videos at once normally. It's just easier for me to try and pump them all out that way lol. That super sucks about yours though, that's the worst!
Originally posted by
cherryredhead88
I am doing the same thing. I got a new webcam and did all 3 of my video reviews last night, only to find out that they didn't record because the software sucks.
Right now I'm just working through almost 3 full pages of assignment cart. Every time I start making progress, my stupid self goes and buys more stuff. Although most of what I bought tonight is lingerie that I'm worried is gonna get discontinued.
06/29/2011
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I think that most grown-ups are ok with someone giving them a little constructive criticism. If their not...ehhh.
Originally posted by
Jul!a
Meh, some people are going to think it's rude, but these are most likely the same people that think that their reviews are awesome no matter what anybody else says and don't want to make them better half the time. I've only run into that
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Meh, some people are going to think it's rude, but these are most likely the same people that think that their reviews are awesome no matter what anybody else says and don't want to make them better half the time. I've only run into that once or twice, but I think that something like that is no worse than the links to the mentor program. So long as you phrase it in a nice enough manner, it should come across like the constructive criticism that it is.
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06/29/2011
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Wow, that's crazy!
Originally posted by
Wondermom
they are pointing out that its a class 4 felony, so I am pretty sure its a whole lot more than just annoying them and chasing them.
06/29/2011
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Lol, good for you!! I've been curious about that one, but haven't bitten the bullet yet.
Originally posted by
sexyintexas
PIKILO!!!! I have been waiting for the free gift to change but I just couldn't wait any more, lol!
06/29/2011
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This. Unfortunately the people that probably need it the most won't think they do.
Originally posted by
Jul!a
Meh, some people are going to think it's rude, but these are most likely the same people that think that their reviews are awesome no matter what anybody else says and don't want to make them better half the time. I've only run into that
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more
Meh, some people are going to think it's rude, but these are most likely the same people that think that their reviews are awesome no matter what anybody else says and don't want to make them better half the time. I've only run into that once or twice, but I think that something like that is no worse than the links to the mentor program. So long as you phrase it in a nice enough manner, it should come across like the constructive criticism that it is.
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06/29/2011
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Listening patiently.
Originally posted by
cherryredhead88
Alright everyone, let's get rolling! I know it is just barely 9 but I have quite a few good things to discuss, and I want to make sure I can get it all in !
I plan on discussing things from how to start writing, to writer's block and ... more
I plan on discussing things from how to start writing, to writer's block and ... more
Alright everyone, let's get rolling! I know it is just barely 9 but I have quite a few good things to discuss, and I want to make sure I can get it all in !
I plan on discussing things from how to start writing, to writer's block and commas/sentences/ misspelled words.
I also realize that no one is perfect and we all make mistakes, I still have problems with commas and those em dashes myself. The goal of this workshop is to a) help everyone better understand some common aspects of writing and b) provide a place for reviewers to refer to (or refer others to) for help.
Any questions/concerns/top ics of discussion? less
I plan on discussing things from how to start writing, to writer's block and commas/sentences/ misspelled words.
I also realize that no one is perfect and we all make mistakes, I still have problems with commas and those em dashes myself. The goal of this workshop is to a) help everyone better understand some common aspects of writing and b) provide a place for reviewers to refer to (or refer others to) for help.
Any questions/concerns/top ics of discussion? less
06/29/2011
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Score! That stuff sounds awesome
Originally posted by
Wondermom
sliquid sample size, my first plug a vibe, the free gift and free eden bullet
06/29/2011
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I think I overuse commas, and I'm very keen on learning how to break writer's block. I think I've finally figured out what works for me, but I don't know how well it'll work for everybody else, lol.
Originally posted by
cherryredhead88
Alright everyone, let's get rolling! I know it is just barely 9 but I have quite a few good things to discuss, and I want to make sure I can get it all in !
I plan on discussing things from how to start writing, to writer's block and ... more
I plan on discussing things from how to start writing, to writer's block and ... more
Alright everyone, let's get rolling! I know it is just barely 9 but I have quite a few good things to discuss, and I want to make sure I can get it all in !
I plan on discussing things from how to start writing, to writer's block and commas/sentences/ misspelled words.
I also realize that no one is perfect and we all make mistakes, I still have problems with commas and those em dashes myself. The goal of this workshop is to a) help everyone better understand some common aspects of writing and b) provide a place for reviewers to refer to (or refer others to) for help.
Any questions/concerns/top ics of discussion? less
I plan on discussing things from how to start writing, to writer's block and commas/sentences/ misspelled words.
I also realize that no one is perfect and we all make mistakes, I still have problems with commas and those em dashes myself. The goal of this workshop is to a) help everyone better understand some common aspects of writing and b) provide a place for reviewers to refer to (or refer others to) for help.
Any questions/concerns/top ics of discussion? less
06/29/2011
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Cool! It does seem like a neat shade. You're going to love it!
Originally posted by
sexyintexas
The purple, I like it because its not the normal purple, more muted. I can't wait!!!
06/29/2011
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sounds awesome to me
Originally posted by
cherryredhead88
Alright everyone, let's get rolling! I know it is just barely 9 but I have quite a few good things to discuss, and I want to make sure I can get it all in !
I plan on discussing things from how to start writing, to writer's block and ... more
I plan on discussing things from how to start writing, to writer's block and ... more
Alright everyone, let's get rolling! I know it is just barely 9 but I have quite a few good things to discuss, and I want to make sure I can get it all in !
I plan on discussing things from how to start writing, to writer's block and commas/sentences/ misspelled words.
I also realize that no one is perfect and we all make mistakes, I still have problems with commas and those em dashes myself. The goal of this workshop is to a) help everyone better understand some common aspects of writing and b) provide a place for reviewers to refer to (or refer others to) for help.
Any questions/concerns/top ics of discussion? less
I plan on discussing things from how to start writing, to writer's block and commas/sentences/ misspelled words.
I also realize that no one is perfect and we all make mistakes, I still have problems with commas and those em dashes myself. The goal of this workshop is to a) help everyone better understand some common aspects of writing and b) provide a place for reviewers to refer to (or refer others to) for help.
Any questions/concerns/top ics of discussion? less
06/29/2011
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You said that so much better than I did, lol.
Originally posted by
cherryredhead88
This. Unfortunately the people that probably need it the most won't think they do.
06/29/2011
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It looks yummy, I think that it will be yet another exciting weekend
Originally posted by
Jul!a
Lol, good for you!! I've been curious about that one, but haven't bitten the bullet yet.
06/29/2011
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I'm all ears, CRH!
Originally posted by
cherryredhead88
Alright everyone, let's get rolling! I know it is just barely 9 but I have quite a few good things to discuss, and I want to make sure I can get it all in !
I plan on discussing things from how to start writing, to writer's block and ... more
I plan on discussing things from how to start writing, to writer's block and ... more
Alright everyone, let's get rolling! I know it is just barely 9 but I have quite a few good things to discuss, and I want to make sure I can get it all in !
I plan on discussing things from how to start writing, to writer's block and commas/sentences/ misspelled words.
I also realize that no one is perfect and we all make mistakes, I still have problems with commas and those em dashes myself. The goal of this workshop is to a) help everyone better understand some common aspects of writing and b) provide a place for reviewers to refer to (or refer others to) for help.
Any questions/concerns/top ics of discussion? less
I plan on discussing things from how to start writing, to writer's block and commas/sentences/ misspelled words.
I also realize that no one is perfect and we all make mistakes, I still have problems with commas and those em dashes myself. The goal of this workshop is to a) help everyone better understand some common aspects of writing and b) provide a place for reviewers to refer to (or refer others to) for help.
Any questions/concerns/top ics of discussion? less
06/29/2011
Alright a lot of my information is coming from the Purde OWL site, and I have a couple other links that I got from Selective Sensualist on B8tr Dude's thread about the editing program.
I would like to start by talking about how everyone starts to write their reviews.
This Purdue article on starting the writing process has some great ideas for getting a feel for how you want to start.
Who is the audience for your writing? (guys, gals, couples, etc)
What does your audience already know about this topic? (what information can you add beyond the product page?)
What does your audience need to know about this topic?
What experiences [have you had] that will help your audience?
What do you hope the audience will gain from your text?
I would like to start by talking about how everyone starts to write their reviews.
This Purdue article on starting the writing process has some great ideas for getting a feel for how you want to start.
Who is the audience for your writing? (guys, gals, couples, etc)
What does your audience already know about this topic? (what information can you add beyond the product page?)
What does your audience need to know about this topic?
What experiences [have you had] that will help your audience?
What do you hope the audience will gain from your text?
06/29/2011
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I can't wait to read your review on it
Originally posted by
sexyintexas
It looks yummy, I think that it will be yet another exciting weekend
06/29/2011
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at least you will get the free eve
Originally posted by
sexyintexas
PIKILO!!!! I have been waiting for the free gift to change but I just couldn't wait any more, lol!
06/29/2011