The New Intimacy

#EdenLit - February Meeting 2/13/2012 at 7pm EST

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Contributor: Woman China Woman China
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
We are going to be having them at the meetings....I dunno if I should give larger ones or keep them at $10 increments. We have a $50 budget I think for them per meeting.
I'd say keep them at ten. Five people getting them is better than one or two! But that is to me the best idea. But some people would say if you offer one or two in a larger sum, would entice more people to come out in the hopes of getting them.
02/13/2012
Contributor: SmutGeek SmutGeek
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Originally posted by Woman China
Actually... that just gave me a brilliant idea!!!

We can make a practice thread for this month using the first person, and the "It was a dark and stormy night..." Where a person completes the end of the sentence, then begins (not ... more
Can someone post the story all together at the end to read all in one go as well?
02/13/2012
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
Quote:
Originally posted by Woman China
Actually... that just gave me a brilliant idea!!!

We can make a practice thread for this month using the first person, and the "It was a dark and stormy night..." Where a person completes the end of the sentence, then begins (not ... more
Brilliant! I'll take a mintue and get it started in this forum. I'll explain about first person perspective and we can make it a Month long game.
02/13/2012
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
Quote:
Originally posted by Woman China
I'd say keep them at ten. Five people getting them is better than one or two! But that is to me the best idea. But some people would say if you offer one or two in a larger sum, would entice more people to come out in the hopes of getting them.
I like the more people getting a bit of sugar idea better myself.
02/13/2012
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
Quote:
Originally posted by SmutGeek
Can someone post the story all together at the end to read all in one go as well?
We could do that! Say the day before the meeting with a link included in the links of the other work?
02/13/2012
Contributor: Woman China Woman China
Ok.. I hate to do this, but my belly is grumbling for breakfast!!!! I'll see you all soon.

And it is Valentine's Day here in China... good lord help me survive this day.
02/13/2012
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
What's another trite way of starting a story?
02/13/2012
Contributor: SmutGeek SmutGeek
Quote:
Originally posted by Airen Wolf
What's another trite way of starting a story?
Once upon a time?
02/13/2012
Contributor: BBW Talks Toys BBW Talks Toys
My story was in first person as well.

Sorry I missed the meeting. Right in the middle of dinner time, and I'm usually not even home on Mondays. :/
02/13/2012
Contributor: SmutGeek SmutGeek
Are we done for the night? it got quiet
02/13/2012
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
Quote:
Originally posted by SmutGeek
Once upon a time?
Ahhhh next month we'll use this one!
02/14/2012
Contributor: Amelia Stone Amelia Stone
SO sorry for missing the meeting. William was writing a paper so I couldn't make it. I'll try to be in the next one.
02/14/2012
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
Quote:
Originally posted by Amelia Stone
SO sorry for missing the meeting. William was writing a paper so I couldn't make it. I'll try to be in the next one.
Not a problem LOVED your work BTW I don't remember if I said that in the meeting!
02/14/2012
Contributor: Cedarlooman Cedarlooman
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
The twist at the end should have pointed to the evolution of the relationship DUH! This is one to read and then re read to catch all the subtlties. VERY good job Cedar!
Thank you Arien, Destri, and Woman...

I wasn't sure if the Shift would pull people out of the story, but I wanted to make sure it was seen as a break. I did have part of it meant to be the growth of a relationship (and the middle part definitely was). I set out to show the most important kisses of a man's life and how they can change his views on relationships.

The kiss of his mother as an infant, the first kiss you dare to take, the first kiss with someone you think you may love, the first kiss of someone you know you are ready to spend your life with, the first kiss with your blushing bride, and the first time you kiss your child. (Which I made a daughter to keep the synergy).

Thanks for the kind words all! Sorry I wasn't present for most of the meeting, I got slammed at the tax office and didn't have a break.
02/16/2012
Contributor: Cedarlooman Cedarlooman
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
LOL I hate to admit it sometimes but I was pretty insecure as a teen and this story is actual truth without embellishments. Sigel wanted me to add a few things but I told him that he was special enough as it was...
It really was great. It caused me to flash back to the teen years and my complete nervousness at wondering when the right time to "make the move" would be.
02/16/2012
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
Quote:
Originally posted by Cedarlooman
Thank you Arien, Destri, and Woman...

I wasn't sure if the Shift would pull people out of the story, but I wanted to make sure it was seen as a break. I did have part of it meant to be the growth of a relationship (and the middle part ... more
Not a problem this is why the forums are open after the meeting! Once I took some time and actually read the story in one sitting I saw the amazingness of this particular work. I'd love to do another book sometime and include this piece. It's amazing.
02/17/2012
Contributor: Woman China Woman China
Quote:
Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Not a problem this is why the forums are open after the meeting! Once I took some time and actually read the story in one sitting I saw the amazingness of this particular work. I'd love to do another book sometime and include this piece. It's ... more
Ok... I second that. Does that mean the notion is passed??? LOL!!!!

I still would like to do an erotic book BUT each story would have to be with toys!!! Then we could call it, "A Season for Toys" and and and and and...

Ignore me!!!!
02/21/2012
Contributor: Cedarlooman Cedarlooman
Quote:
Originally posted by Woman China
Ok... I second that. Does that mean the notion is passed??? LOL!!!!

I still would like to do an erotic book BUT each story would have to be with toys!!! Then we could call it, "A Season for Toys" and and and and and...

Ignore me!!!!
+1

Ignoring you would be impossible, like ignoring the North Wind. LOL

and there is absolutely nothing wrong with toys. Most of my stories use at least one.
02/24/2012