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#EdenLit - February Meeting 2/13/2012 at 7pm EST

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Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
Welcome to the Eden Lit Club Meeting for February!
This Month we have one major change, the Eden Blog is no more. We are working on a permanent home for our writing so bear with us.
Here is a clickable list to all the work that was submitted this Month on our topics:
*Truffles- All about the erotic, chocolate treats!
*Critical Review First Kiss- Describe that first kiss you recieved that let you know you had been kissed. Use simple but evocative language and be as descriptive as you can be. Avoid easy fixes and rushed language.
*Open Topic- Tell us what's on your mind!

First Encounters...Of A Three Legged Man and Tequila by Woman China
Pure by Silverdrop
Evolution Of A Kiss by Cedarlooman
Susie Cleans Up by Cedarlooman
Masturbation Blues Take 5 by Woman
Love At Snow Lake part 1 by PassionateLover2
Love At Snow Lake part 2 by PassionateLover2
Heart And Mind by Amelia Stone
First Time by BBW Talks Toys
First Kiss by AirenWolf

If I have missed anyone or anyone would like to be added to our discussion please add a link to your story to this forum and we'll be happy to check it out!

ALSO, our Truffle topic is a cross over with the Eden Cooks Club so be sure to check them out this Month to learn all about how to make these amazing treats!
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Contributor: Jul!a Jul!a
I can't believe the meeting is already tonight!
02/13/2012
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
Tonight I have a different sort of format in mind. We will begin to look at writing as a whole and sort of dissect the process and form a bit to better understand what we are doing. I'd like to look at First person narrative and I'll explain what that is and then for the critical review we'll attempt to write from this perspective.
First we'll take a look at the work that is labeled as critical review, and then we'll spend some time discussing the other topics....mmmmmm truffles!
I'd like to keep it fun and light and totally inclusive. We are looking to improve our writing as a writing club not an erotica club! So please understand that when you are critiquing as well as when you are writing. We might have some Months where we explore what it means to write erotica as well as how to write non-fiction. We want to explore and expand our horizons.
02/13/2012
Contributor: Woman China Woman China
I'm up! I'm up!!! Honest!!! I just literally woke up, went to check the emails and thought... there is something I've got to do this morning. What the heck is it???

I so need coffee and breakfast!!! Whose with me!!!!
02/13/2012
Contributor: PassionateLover2 PassionateLover2
Quote:
Originally posted by Woman China
I'm up! I'm up!!! Honest!!! I just literally woke up, went to check the emails and thought... there is something I've got to do this morning. What the heck is it???

I so need coffee and breakfast!!! Whose with me!!!!
Starbuck coffee sounds good! However, here in Seattle, it is approaching 4:00pm; almost dinner time for me!!! I would rather have a drink!!
02/13/2012
Contributor: Jul!a Jul!a
I'm here! Getting ready to scarf dinner really quick though!
02/13/2012
Contributor: Destri Destri
I'm here, for the first time ever. Excited to be here, too!
02/13/2012
Contributor: Woman China Woman China
Quote:
Originally posted by PassionateLover2
Starbuck coffee sounds good! However, here in Seattle, it is approaching 4:00pm; almost dinner time for me!!! I would rather have a drink!!
Am I the only one who finds Starbucks coffee... well.. not that good? I find it very acidic. But don't get me wrong, when I am in Beijing? I am all over Starbucks like me on a sex toy. Something western and all that!!!

I actually really like McDonalds coffee.

But it is just going on 8am here... Happy Valentine's Day!
02/13/2012
Contributor: Destri Destri
Quote:
Originally posted by Woman China
Am I the only one who finds Starbucks coffee... well.. not that good? I find it very acidic. But don't get me wrong, when I am in Beijing? I am all over Starbucks like me on a sex toy. Something western and all that!!!

I actually really ... more
I have never had Starbucks! I like Dunkin Donuts coffee, but mostly I just drink my own at home. Happy Valentine's Day back at ya, even though it is only a few minutes before 5 PM on Monday here....
02/13/2012
Contributor: PassionateLover2 PassionateLover2
Quote:
Originally posted by Woman China
Am I the only one who finds Starbucks coffee... well.. not that good? I find it very acidic. But don't get me wrong, when I am in Beijing? I am all over Starbucks like me on a sex toy. Something western and all that!!!

I actually really ... more
To enjoy Starbucks, you have to enjoy it dark roasted and very, very strong!!!

I am here!
02/13/2012
Contributor: Woman China Woman China
Quote:
Originally posted by PassionateLover2
Starbuck coffee sounds good! However, here in Seattle, it is approaching 4:00pm; almost dinner time for me!!! I would rather have a drink!!
Am I the only one who finds Starbucks coffee... well.. not that good? I find it very acidic. But don't get me wrong, when I am in Beijing? I am all over Starbucks like me on a sex toy. Something western and all that!!!

I actually really like McDonalds coffee.

But it is just going on 8am here... Happy Valentine's Day!
02/13/2012
Contributor: SmutGeek SmutGeek
Happy Valentines Day!

I'm here, first time.
I did write something for the prompt and posted it on my blog all of an hour ago...is it too late to submit?
02/13/2012
Contributor: PassionateLover2 PassionateLover2
It looks like anything I say will be used against me!!!!

Ha Ha!!
02/13/2012
Contributor: Jul!a Jul!a
Hey everybody!
02/13/2012
Contributor: Destri Destri
Hi!
02/13/2012
Contributor: SmutGeek SmutGeek
Quote:
Originally posted by PassionateLover2
Starbuck coffee sounds good! However, here in Seattle, it is approaching 4:00pm; almost dinner time for me!!! I would rather have a drink!!
Man a drink sounds good...is it too early for VDay cocktails?
02/13/2012
Contributor: PassionateLover2 PassionateLover2
Quote:
Originally posted by Destri
Hi!
I think I just followed you the other day!! Nice to see you here!
02/13/2012
Contributor: Jul!a Jul!a
Quote:
Originally posted by SmutGeek
Man a drink sounds good...is it too early for VDay cocktails?
Haha, never!
02/13/2012
Contributor: Destri Destri
Quote:
Originally posted by PassionateLover2
I think I just followed you the other day!! Nice to see you here!
Yes, you did! Thanks for that, and nice to meet you here as well!
02/13/2012
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
ACK I am here one sec and I'll open the meeting
02/13/2012
Contributor: PassionateLover2 PassionateLover2
Quote:
Originally posted by SmutGeek
Man a drink sounds good...is it too early for VDay cocktails?
You should look at 'wetone123' thread has A to Z Drinks!!
02/13/2012
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
Welcome to the February 2012 Meeting of the Eden Lit Club!

Tonight we have so much to talk about! So let's begin with CedarLoomans Evolution of a kiss! From a reader's point of view what did you guys think?
02/13/2012
Contributor: Woman China Woman China
Best coffee on the planet... dark roasted, full bodied, and black. And uber strong.

But not acidic.

Today is a festival day, so I get to pull out my coffee from the Dominican Republic and enjoy it's flavour!!! I am a coffee whore. I know. But... here we have ready access to instant and that is it. So when I get the real stuff... I go bonkers!!!
02/13/2012
Contributor: Woman China Woman China
Quote:
Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Welcome to the February 2012 Meeting of the Eden Lit Club!

Tonight we have so much to talk about! So let's begin with CedarLoomans Evolution of a kiss! From a reader's point of view what did you guys think?
Hello!!! Hello!!!
02/13/2012
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
Personally i thought the first part was almost like it was a baby's first maternal kiss. It was tender and very sweet. As the story unfolded it seemed to add up to all the stages of a relationship and I loved the slow glide of the story....just the way I imagined that kiss.
02/13/2012
Contributor: SmutGeek SmutGeek
Is it too late to submit my story for reading, doesn't have to be reviewed on there tonight, just wanted to contribute a little something for VDay
02/13/2012
Contributor: Destri Destri
I agree, Airen. I loved the evolution of the relationship
02/13/2012
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
Quote:
Originally posted by SmutGeek
Is it too late to submit my story for reading, doesn't have to be reviewed on there tonight, just wanted to contribute a little something for VDay
You can post it to the forum at any time! Tonight's contributions are the ones posted above but we can take a peek before we close the meeting.
02/13/2012
Contributor: PassionateLover2 PassionateLover2
What I liked about his story, was how detailed it was. It made me aware how much thought was put into such a tender moment.
02/13/2012
Contributor: Cedarlooman Cedarlooman
I am at the tax office, bit will be checking in between clients.
02/13/2012