The New Intimacy

Eden Lit- February 14, 2011 at 7pm: Writer's Club

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Contributor: Redboxbaby Redboxbaby
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Originally posted by Woman China
RedBox... "Wet heat encased my clit." is a fantastic line!!!!!!
Ha! I tried for hours to figure out something clever to say there.
02/14/2011
Contributor: Jul!a Jul!a
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
I was most taken by BBW's 'Frozen Exposure Turns Red Hot' because as a college kid I was in a group of people who would do such silly things though we never took it quite that far! The scenes were red hot and the descriptions were somehow ... more
I'd definitely have to agree with that. I actually read that one first since she sent it to me as well as Gary, and wow. I never would have guessed from reading that that it was her first time writing erotica. My group of friends in high school would do stupid stuff like that (again, not ever taking it that far), and my friends in college were just as bad, lol.
02/14/2011
Contributor: Jul!a Jul!a
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Originally posted by SexyTabby
Mine is a plumber...he ain't touching me til he's had a serious shower lmao
Lol, I can imagine.
02/14/2011
Contributor: SexyTabby SexyTabby
Quote:
Originally posted by Airen Wolf
I was most taken by BBW's 'Frozen Exposure Turns Red Hot' because as a college kid I was in a group of people who would do such silly things though we never took it quite that far! The scenes were red hot and the descriptions were somehow ... more
I found BBW's very intriguing. Despite the happily married, straight, blah blah blah I've always found women to be very beautiful and the connection between the two always excites. I liked this one a lot and yes I could easily see it being a couple of college girls.
02/14/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
So we have three topics:

1. St. Patrick's Day- anything and everything St. Pat's! Ireland, kissing the blarney stone, snakes, and the wearin' of the green.

2. Masturbation Mishaps- what happens when it all goes horribly wrong?

3. Story Continuation- here is where an author can continue a popular story or a series with a theme.

Is that ok? Any additions you feel might be needed? Do you have another topic suggestion?
02/14/2011
Contributor: Woman China Woman China
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Originally posted by Redboxbaby
Ha! I tried for hours to figure out something clever to say there.
It is perfect!!!! It says so much without being "nasty" or out of tune. It is classy and not vulgar.

Have you written other things as well?
02/14/2011
Contributor: Jul!a Jul!a
Quote:
Originally posted by Airen Wolf
So we have three topics:

1. St. Patrick's Day- anything and everything St. Pat's! Ireland, kissing the blarney stone, snakes, and the wearin' of the green.

2. Masturbation Mishaps- what happens when it all goes horribly ... more
I'm good with that right there
02/14/2011
Contributor: Alys Alys
Quote:
Originally posted by Airen Wolf
So we have three topics:

1. St. Patrick's Day- anything and everything St. Pat's! Ireland, kissing the blarney stone, snakes, and the wearin' of the green.

2. Masturbation Mishaps- what happens when it all goes horribly ... more
I'm happy with these
02/14/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
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Originally posted by SexyTabby
Mine is a plumber...he ain't touching me til he's had a serious shower lmao
ergh I can't exactly blame you there...
02/14/2011
Contributor: SexyTabby SexyTabby
Quote:
Originally posted by Airen Wolf
So we have three topics:

1. St. Patrick's Day- anything and everything St. Pat's! Ireland, kissing the blarney stone, snakes, and the wearin' of the green.

2. Masturbation Mishaps- what happens when it all goes horribly ... more
I think these will work great. I didn't get to finish my last one but I can turn him into a Leprechaun and actually get this one done on time Actually, it's kinda scary but the Leprechaun change might improve it lol
02/14/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
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Originally posted by SexyTabby
I think these will work great. I didn't get to finish my last one but I can turn him into a Leprechaun and actually get this one done on time Actually, it's kinda scary but the Leprechaun change might improve it lol
Scary works! I think any story can only be improved by adding a leprechaun or a zombie...or a zombie leprechaun *shiver* talk about scary!
02/14/2011
Contributor: Alys Alys
Quote:
Originally posted by SexyTabby
I think these will work great. I didn't get to finish my last one but I can turn him into a Leprechaun and actually get this one done on time Actually, it's kinda scary but the Leprechaun change might improve it lol
If there was a startled, yet quizzical smiley-face, I'd use it here!
02/14/2011
Contributor: Woman China Woman China
Quote:
Originally posted by Airen Wolf
So we have three topics:

1. St. Patrick's Day- anything and everything St. Pat's! Ireland, kissing the blarney stone, snakes, and the wearin' of the green.

2. Masturbation Mishaps- what happens when it all goes horribly ... more
Quick question... can I submit more than one entry into the Story Continuation (sounds like something from Star Gate)? I am almost finished the fourth part and working on the fifth on and off again.

And did you want to keep three or want maybe "Your favourite fantasy" as well?
02/14/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
Quote:
Originally posted by Woman China
Quick question... can I submit more than one entry into the Story Continuation (sounds like something from Star Gate)? I am almost finished the fourth part and working on the fifth on and off again.

And did you want to keep three or want maybe ... more
Absolutely you can submit up to three entries (or however many topics the group decides) we are limiting it because of time factor for readers. This allows each writer to submit one piece for each topic or any combination desired.

Do you guys want to keep three topics that change and just add the fourth as the continuation category? Would that make be too many topics?
02/14/2011
Contributor: Woman China Woman China
Quote:
Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Absolutely you can submit up to three entries (or however many topics the group decides) we are limiting it because of time factor for readers. This allows each writer to submit one piece for each topic or any combination desired.

Do you guys ... more
What about three changing topics each month, and the constant fourth being story continuation???
02/14/2011
Contributor: Jul!a Jul!a
Quote:
Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Absolutely you can submit up to three entries (or however many topics the group decides) we are limiting it because of time factor for readers. This allows each writer to submit one piece for each topic or any combination desired.

Do you guys ... more
Hmm, I could see it going either way really. I'm ok with whatever gets decided.
02/14/2011
Contributor: SexyTabby SexyTabby
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Originally posted by Alys
If there was a startled, yet quizzical smiley-face, I'd use it here!
lmao well I don't know what to say lol

zombie leprechaun lol
02/14/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
Quote:
Originally posted by Woman China
What about three changing topics each month, and the constant fourth being story continuation???
Basically it means we choose three new topics each month and the fourth topic is always the same. This keeps the stories fresh and also allows the authors who like to write in series' a chance to continue their stories without having to make them conform to a set topic. Does that make sense?
02/14/2011
Contributor: SexyTabby SexyTabby
Quote:
Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Absolutely you can submit up to three entries (or however many topics the group decides) we are limiting it because of time factor for readers. This allows each writer to submit one piece for each topic or any combination desired.

Do you guys ... more
I like the two and then a continuation one. Keeps it easy to follow when reading them.
02/14/2011
Contributor: Woman China Woman China
Quote:
Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Basically it means we choose three new topics each month and the fourth topic is always the same. This keeps the stories fresh and also allows the authors who like to write in series' a chance to continue their stories without having to make them ... more
Morning moment. Sorry! Yes it makes sense.

Ok... my question then becomes... can I submit three stories into one topic category?
02/14/2011
Contributor: Redboxbaby Redboxbaby
Quote:
Originally posted by Woman China
It is perfect!!!! It says so much without being "nasty" or out of tune. It is classy and not vulgar.

Have you written other things as well?
I have not written erotica before this attempt. In the past, yes, I have written other pieces.
02/14/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
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Originally posted by SexyTabby
I like the two and then a continuation one. Keeps it easy to follow when reading them.
Yeah that's what I was thinking as well. If we add too many topics it gets to be a nightmare to follow them.
02/14/2011
Contributor: Redboxbaby Redboxbaby
Quote:
Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Basically it means we choose three new topics each month and the fourth topic is always the same. This keeps the stories fresh and also allows the authors who like to write in series' a chance to continue their stories without having to make them ... more
I like this.
02/14/2011
Contributor: Alys Alys
Quote:
Originally posted by SexyTabby
I like the two and then a continuation one. Keeps it easy to follow when reading them.
I agree, and the topics we're choosing are quite broad, so there is plenty of room for imagination and personal expression.
02/14/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
Quote:
Originally posted by Woman China
Morning moment. Sorry! Yes it makes sense.

Ok... my question then becomes... can I submit three stories into one topic category?
Absolutely! You could also submit two stories and a poem; or say one editorial, one poem and a story. We limit the number of submissions but not the combination.
02/14/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
So how was everyone's Valentine's Day? Mine was special. My guys collaborated to buy me a lovely arrangement of pink and white roses and they actually managed to keep it a secret!
02/14/2011
Contributor: SexyTabby SexyTabby
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
So how was everyone's Valentine's Day? Mine was special. My guys collaborated to buy me a lovely arrangement of pink and white roses and they actually managed to keep it a secret!
Mine came home with a card, some candy and a balloon which my lil one has already claimed lol I got him a card and a new sexy outfit for me that he gets to enjoy later.
02/14/2011
Contributor: Redboxbaby Redboxbaby
Quote:
Originally posted by Airen Wolf
So how was everyone's Valentine's Day? Mine was special. My guys collaborated to buy me a lovely arrangement of pink and white roses and they actually managed to keep it a secret!
My V-Day was yesterday and it was fantastic.
02/14/2011
Contributor: Alys Alys
Quote:
Originally posted by Airen Wolf
So how was everyone's Valentine's Day? Mine was special. My guys collaborated to buy me a lovely arrangement of pink and white roses and they actually managed to keep it a secret!
That's wonderful! Mine was pretty amazing... I got hired! I just need to pass my state license exam and I'll be an Insurance Sales Agent! (May not sound exciting, but I've been job hunting for over 6 months)
02/14/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
Quote:
Originally posted by SexyTabby
Mine came home with a card, some candy and a balloon which my lil one has already claimed lol I got him a card and a new sexy outfit for me that he gets to enjoy later.
Awwwww sounds sweet! Min would have claimed the balloon as well...and probably named it. She's an odd duck
02/14/2011