The New Intimacy

Eden Lit- February 14, 2011 at 7pm: Writer's Club

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Contributor: Gary Gary
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Originally posted by Alys
Talking to cats, I often thought would be interesting, but very humbling. I just like their personalities, and can imagine a sarcastic Dogbert-like side-kick, if we were ever able to communicate with them
My cat sits in an office chair next to me while I work everyday. I talk to her quite often.
02/14/2011
Contributor: SexyTabby SexyTabby
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Lauren's poem was very heartfelt and her grief came through in the poem. I liked that there was also a thread of hope running through it that she would see her friend again someday.
I felt sad when I read Lauren's. It's so personal and emotional.
02/14/2011
Contributor: Redboxbaby Redboxbaby
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Originally posted by SexyTabby
I felt sad when I read Lauren's. It's so personal and emotional.
I agree with that statement. I could totally feel the emotion come through.
02/14/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
Holy Cow RedBoxBaby had me reading in short bursts...that was some scortching stuff! I had to read it that way because my kids use my office to watch tv and I couldn't help reacting to the story.
I loved how the husband kept his wife on edge the whole night before giving her a night she would be sure to think about while he was gone! Was that a retelling of something that actually happened?
02/14/2011
Contributor: Woman China Woman China
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Originally posted by SexyTabby
I felt sad when I read Lauren's. It's so personal and emotional.
Is it a longerish poem? I am unable to get to all the blogspot site... is it possible to be posted in here???
02/14/2011
Contributor: Alys Alys
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Originally posted by SexyTabby
I felt sad when I read Lauren's. It's so personal and emotional.
I felt oddly hopeful and peaceful. It reminded me of all the feelings I felt when my grandmother died, and how I believe that someday we will meet again, and that her spirit is still with me today. It was a wonderful warm, fuzzy feeling that took me several months to reach, personally.
02/14/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
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Originally posted by Woman China
The entire series is about voyeurism and exhibitionism sprinkled with a little spice and thrill. I do feel it is important to bring what really does happen into my stories to make it more real for the reader. Besides.... what is sex and erotica ... more
Boring is what it is! The best sex I have ever had, at least the most memorable, are the times I have laughed in sheer joy during it. Erotica that adds this element always catches my heart.
02/14/2011
Contributor: Redboxbaby Redboxbaby
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Holy Cow RedBoxBaby had me reading in short bursts...that was some scortching stuff! I had to read it that way because my kids use my office to watch tv and I couldn't help reacting to the story.
I loved how the husband kept his wife on edge ... more
There should always be a bit of truth in a story to keep it believable don't you think?
02/14/2011
Contributor: SexyTabby SexyTabby
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Originally posted by Woman China
Is it a longerish poem? I am unable to get to all the blogspot site... is it possible to be posted in here???
Here's Lauren's submission...

For my Eden's Writers Club submission, I chose this piece:
Although a little early, I am posting a poem that it very dear to me. I lost a very close friend while I was in high school. He passed away unexpectedly and I have never quite gotten over it. The love I have for my friend was completely unconditional. Even at 23 years of age, I now still look up to my friend who died at 17. I think of him everyday.
Let’s Not Say Goodbye
2-25-2005: JRH Rest In Peace
Written by: LEW ©

Let’s not say goodbye
It’ll only leave me drying my eyes
To part with you I’ll never know how
For in my tender heart
I know we’ll meet again if we ever part
Every time you’re not around
I’ll pick up your picture and I’ll be sound
Crying, I’ll look at your beautiful face
No memory of you will ever be erased
You’re a wonderful person inside & out
My trust in you I do not doubt
I’ll never pull away even for a little while
I long to see your wonderful smile
So when we are gone from outside these doors
My heart will always be yours
With me forever you will have a special place
In my mind you have left a trace
It’ll only leave me drying my eyes
So lets not say goodbye
02/14/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
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Originally posted by Woman China
What are all the topics so far?
So far for March we've decided to have a sort of open topic that will allow our authors the opportunity to write a next installment on a series. The other two topics are up for suggestions!
02/14/2011
Contributor: Woman China Woman China
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Boring is what it is! The best sex I have ever had, at least the most memorable, are the times I have laughed in sheer joy during it. Erotica that adds this element always catches my heart.
LOL!!!! My favourite erotic story I had ever read set my body aflame... then I fell out of my chair laughing when the woman I was reading about fell out of bed.
02/14/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
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Originally posted by Woman China
Is it a longerish poem? I am unable to get to all the blogspot site... is it possible to be posted in here???
I imagine if you ask lauren she'd be happy to send you a copy through the EF email system. It is definately worth reading.
02/14/2011
Contributor: Woman China Woman China
Lauren... that is indeed a very simple yet elegant poem... classy is what it is. Thank-you for sharing it!!!!!!
02/14/2011
Contributor: SexyTabby SexyTabby
Redboxbaby dear lawd your's had me wanting a serious cold shower lol I loved it.
02/14/2011
Contributor: Woman China Woman China
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
So far for March we've decided to have a sort of open topic that will allow our authors the opportunity to write a next installment on a series. The other two topics are up for suggestions!
What about poetry or possibly a long story contribution?

LOL!!!! OR my favourite topic to laugh about... masturbation mishaps
02/14/2011
Contributor: Redboxbaby Redboxbaby
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Originally posted by SexyTabby
Redboxbaby dear lawd your's had me wanting a serious cold shower lol I loved it.
So glad you liked it. I am always worried it was too graphic.
02/14/2011
Contributor: Alys Alys
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Originally posted by Woman China
What about poetry or possibly a long story contribution?

LOL!!!! OR my favourite topic to laugh about... masturbation mishaps
Ooooh I second masturbation mishaps
02/14/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
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Originally posted by Redboxbaby
There should always be a bit of truth in a story to keep it believable don't you think?
LOL and it keeps readers wondering and living in a state of mild jealousy. I could se this actually happening excapt for some of the areas smacked...but then we have a set patern of acceptible areas for flogging/spanking mainly because I have serious back problems and it wouldn't be just painful to me to be struck in those areas it could be actually dangerous.
I could just picture the look of shock and then the dawning awareness of how many times he could punish her for....I've had that look on my face often enough.
02/14/2011
Contributor: Redboxbaby Redboxbaby
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Originally posted by Alys
Ooooh I second masturbation mishaps
I third that one!
02/14/2011
Contributor: Jul!a Jul!a
Redboxbaby, that was a great story. I'm even thinking of passing it onto my husband to give him some ideas
02/14/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
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Originally posted by Woman China
What about poetry or possibly a long story contribution?

LOL!!!! OR my favourite topic to laugh about... masturbation mishaps
I like the idea of masturbation mishaps! You are always welcome to submit a longer story or poem.
02/14/2011
Contributor: Woman China Woman China
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Originally posted by Redboxbaby
I third that one!
How many submissions are we allowed to have?? LOL!!!!

What about "New Toy" as a topic too?
02/14/2011
Contributor: SexyTabby SexyTabby
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Originally posted by Redboxbaby
So glad you liked it. I am always worried it was too graphic.
Kinda mirrored one of my own fantasies except my Hubby isn't nearly as cooperative lol so I was partial to it. I don't think it could be too graphic.
02/14/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
Right then: First topic is masturbation Mishaps?

BBW would like to suggest something to do with St. Patricks Day or Ireland as a topic.
02/14/2011
Contributor: Redboxbaby Redboxbaby
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
LOL and it keeps readers wondering and living in a state of mild jealousy. I could se this actually happening excapt for some of the areas smacked...but then we have a set patern of acceptible areas for flogging/spanking mainly because I have ... more
"I could just picture the look of shock and then the dawning awareness of how many times he could punish her for....I've had that look on my face often enough."

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LOL. That look happens upon my face a lot! I forget quite often that he keeps track.
02/14/2011
Contributor: SexyTabby SexyTabby
Oh I like masturbation mishaps thats too funny.
02/14/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
Quote:
Originally posted by Airen Wolf
LOL and it keeps readers wondering and living in a state of mild jealousy. I could se this actually happening excapt for some of the areas smacked...but then we have a set patern of acceptible areas for flogging/spanking mainly because I have ... more
Gaah you'll have to forgive my spelling tonight. I have a sinus infection that gives me major migrains and the meds I'm taking for it all leaves me a bit loopy.
02/14/2011
Contributor: SexyTabby SexyTabby
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Right then: First topic is masturbation Mishaps?

BBW would like to suggest something to do with St. Patricks Day or Ireland as a topic.
Leprechauns - that's intriguing.
02/14/2011
Contributor: Jul!a Jul!a
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Right then: First topic is masturbation Mishaps?

BBW would like to suggest something to do with St. Patricks Day or Ireland as a topic.
Yes! And since the next meeting is in March, I'm definitely ok with something St. Patricks Day related.
02/14/2011
Contributor: Woman China Woman China
RedBox... "Wet heat encased my clit." is a fantastic line!!!!!!
02/14/2011