The New Intimacy

Eden Lit- February 14, 2011 at 7pm: Writer's Club

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Contributor: Jul!a Jul!a
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Originally posted by SexyTabby
Leprechauns - that's intriguing.
Leprechaun masturbation mishaps perhaps?
02/14/2011
Contributor: Redboxbaby Redboxbaby
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Originally posted by Jul!a
Redboxbaby, that was a great story. I'm even thinking of passing it onto my husband to give him some ideas
All right! You'll have to write your own story then and share the results. Just kidding.
02/14/2011
Contributor: Alys Alys
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Gaah you'll have to forgive my spelling tonight. I have a sinus infection that gives me major migrains and the meds I'm taking for it all leaves me a bit loopy.
I've been doing sinus irrigation since last year when I got two sinus infections in as many months. Hope you feel better quickly!
02/14/2011
Contributor: SexyTabby SexyTabby
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Originally posted by Jul!a
Leprechaun masturbation mishaps perhaps?
That made me laugh and now the kids came to be nosy lol
02/14/2011
Contributor: Alys Alys
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Originally posted by Jul!a
Leprechaun masturbation mishaps perhaps?
*tries to wrap mind around that*
02/14/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
Next on the list would be my contributions. The first one Silver Dance was something I wrote to help my group roleplay on Lineage 2. It was one of my first real attempts at fiction writing and it is a bit stage-y in it's language. I didn't change it because it seemed to fit somehow. It was my bow to the topic alien apocalypse.
I wasn't too heavily into writing erotica back in those days so it's light on the really erotic descriptions.

The second one 'Freedom' actually wrote for Arch with Sigel's help. It was my gift to him last year on Valentine's Day.
02/14/2011
Contributor: Jul!a Jul!a
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Originally posted by Alys
*tries to wrap mind around that*
I have a mental image of a little leprechaun man beating off so feverishly that he's falling off a chair. It's quite amusing on my end, lol
02/14/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
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Originally posted by Jul!a
Leprechaun masturbation mishaps perhaps?
LOL I wonder though would that be mishaps while masturbating WITh leprechauns or mishaps that happen TO leprechauns while masturbating? I guess we'll leave that up to the writers.
02/14/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
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Originally posted by Jul!a
I have a mental image of a little leprechaun man beating off so feverishly that he's falling off a chair. It's quite amusing on my end, lol
I would love to read about that....my odd sense of humor kicking in
02/14/2011
Contributor: Woman China Woman China
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Originally posted by Jul!a
I have a mental image of a little leprechaun man beating off so feverishly that he's falling off a chair. It's quite amusing on my end, lol
LOL!!!!!!!

Shhh!! no making me laugh! I just got my screen cleaned from my coffee the first time I read "leprechaun mastubation mishaps"!!!!!
02/14/2011
Contributor: Jul!a Jul!a
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
I would love to read about that....my odd sense of humor kicking in
hah! Mayhaps I'll have to write a little ditty about it...
02/14/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
Shall we set up the topic of St. Pat's Day like we did for Valentine's Day? It can be anything related to the day including diatribes against the commercialism of it?
02/14/2011
Contributor: Woman China Woman China
Is it possible to not only have links to members blogs, but to post them as well in the EdenBlog next month as I know I am the only one with issues when it comes to blogspot.
02/14/2011
Contributor: Alys Alys
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Shall we set up the topic of St. Pat's Day like we did for Valentine's Day? It can be anything related to the day including diatribes against the commercialism of it?
And could include leprechaun masturbation mishaps! Good all 'round.
02/14/2011
Contributor: SexyTabby SexyTabby
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Next on the list would be my contributions. The first one Silver Dance was something I wrote to help my group roleplay on Lineage 2. It was one of my first real attempts at fiction writing and it is a bit stage-y in it's language. I didn't ... more
It took me a few minutes to get into and figure out what was happening in Silver Dance - that one seems like it's been shortened and left me wondering what was in the details in time that we didn't get to see. But it was really cool and the concept is awesome.

Don't remember one named Freedom...goes back to list to see what I missed...
02/14/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
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Originally posted by Woman China
Is it possible to not only have links to members blogs, but to post them as well in the EdenBlog next month as I know I am the only one with issues when it comes to blogspot.
Unfortunately we left it open to people to post on their own blogs because some of our authors were worried about losing their copywrite.
02/14/2011
Contributor: Jul!a Jul!a
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Shall we set up the topic of St. Pat's Day like we did for Valentine's Day? It can be anything related to the day including diatribes against the commercialism of it?
Yes, absolutely.
02/14/2011
Contributor: Alys Alys
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Originally posted by Woman China
Is it possible to not only have links to members blogs, but to post them as well in the EdenBlog next month as I know I am the only one with issues when it comes to blogspot.
Is there some way to link it to you, or provide you with a link to blogspot that you could use? (not entirely technologically savvy, here)
02/14/2011
Contributor: Woman China Woman China
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Unfortunately we left it open to people to post on their own blogs because some of our authors were worried about losing their copywrite.
that makes sense... I will get sneaky and creative to pass through the Great Firewall!!!!
02/14/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
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Originally posted by SexyTabby
It took me a few minutes to get into and figure out what was happening in Silver Dance - that one seems like it's been shortened and left me wondering what was in the details in time that we didn't get to see. But it was really cool and the ... more
It isn't officially listed it's on the blog. Ya because Silver Dance was written for a specific audience it does leave others a bit confused. Basically the premise is the world had 4 races and they were near immortal until one of the races sought to use magic to create life. It disrupted the balance of the natural order and threw the world into chaos.
It's sort of a soft allegory for "The Fall" or how death came to exist.
02/14/2011
Contributor: Alys Alys
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
It isn't officially listed it's on the blog. Ya because Silver Dance was written for a specific audience it does leave others a bit confused. Basically the premise is the world had 4 races and they were near immortal until one of the races ... more
I thought that Silver Dance was beautiful, even without the backstory. The imagery got my imagination going, and the relationships seemed very REAL.
02/14/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
Silvi's 'Feet Feat' was superb. I had to show it to Arch who is an acknowledged foot fetishist. He was very impressed about how lovingly the feet are described and how Silvi touched on all the points that drive him when he is fantasizing about a lovely pair of feet. He could imagine himself being the poor little guy just wanting to taste.
02/14/2011
Contributor: SexyTabby SexyTabby
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Silvi's 'Feet Feat' was superb. I had to show it to Arch who is an acknowledged foot fetishist. He was very impressed about how lovingly the feet are described and how Silvi touched on all the points that drive him when he is fantasizing ... more
Feet tend to freak me out but I thought the story was interesting. I'd have been one of those weirdos who made the lil guy take a bath though lol
02/14/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
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Originally posted by Alys
I thought that Silver Dance was beautiful, even without the backstory. The imagery got my imagination going, and the relationships seemed very REAL.
This was written just as I started to become aware that I was falling in love with Arch but wasn't falling out of love with Sigel. I think al lot of what I was feeling went into the story and it added a bit of emotion when she talked about each of the men she loved. My daughters were very young when I wrote this as well and I imagined what I would say to them about their father if they didn't know him.

The game scenery is incredibly beautiful and detailed which helped with the story a lot.
02/14/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
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Originally posted by SexyTabby
Feet tend to freak me out but I thought the story was interesting. I'd have been one of those weirdos who made the lil guy take a bath though lol
LOL I thought the same thing when he started to finger her....I was all like "Not in my clean pussy! Into the bathtub with you!"
02/14/2011
Contributor: SexyTabby SexyTabby
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
LOL I thought the same thing when he started to finger her....I was all like "Not in my clean pussy! Into the bathtub with you!"
oh good it wasn't just me lmao
02/14/2011
Contributor: Jul!a Jul!a
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Originally posted by SexyTabby
Feet tend to freak me out but I thought the story was interesting. I'd have been one of those weirdos who made the lil guy take a bath though lol
My husband does a lot of work on cars and is often quite filthy. I don't always make him scrub his whole body down, but I always make him scrub his hands real well.
02/14/2011
Contributor: Jul!a Jul!a
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
LOL I thought the same thing when he started to finger her....I was all like "Not in my clean pussy! Into the bathtub with you!"
Lol, same here
02/14/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
I was most taken by BBW's 'Frozen Exposure Turns Red Hot' because as a college kid I was in a group of people who would do such silly things though we never took it quite that far! The scenes were red hot and the descriptions were somehow sweet. It made the sex seem like it was happening to a couple of college girls.

For a first attempt at erotica I'd say it was A-freakin-mazing.
02/14/2011
Contributor: SexyTabby SexyTabby
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Originally posted by Jul!a
My husband does a lot of work on cars and is often quite filthy. I don't always make him scrub his whole body down, but I always make him scrub his hands real well.
Mine is a plumber...he ain't touching me til he's had a serious shower lmao
02/14/2011