Eden Lit- February 14, 2011 at 7pm: Writer's Club

Contributor: Alys Alys
I really liked this post, as an outsider looking in. I'd never heard of Imbolc or Lady's Day, and found it very interesting to see what goes on to celebrate this day. I also loved the blessings
02/14/2011
Contributor: SexyTabby SexyTabby
Agreed it was interesting and cool.
02/14/2011
Contributor: Alys Alys
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Originally posted by Redboxbaby
Alys, I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Thanks, I'm planning for it to be a little of the history of what Michele is running from, an explanation as to why she can understand Lucy, and who/what Aedan really is. A little fantasy, a little erotica
02/14/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
So often I find that historical pieces written by pagans seem to almost demonize the Catholics but I loved how Bex didn't go there just made a simple point that Brigid was canonized as a Patron Saint. It kept the focus on the topic of the piece rather than veering off on a tangent.
02/14/2011
Contributor: Redboxbaby Redboxbaby
I still have 3 stories yet to read. I'm getting there.
02/14/2011
Contributor: Woman China Woman China
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Originally posted by BBW Talks Toys
I didn't get a chance to finish all the posts. It's been a crazy few days, so here's my thoughts on what I have read.

@ChinaWoman I think we have some shared love of voyeuristic/exhibition ist experiences.

@Airen, ... more
That whole series is along the same lines!!!!
02/14/2011
Contributor: Redboxbaby Redboxbaby
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
So often I find that historical pieces written by pagans seem to almost demonize the Catholics but I loved how Bex didn't go there just made a simple point that Brigid was canonized as a Patron Saint. It kept the focus on the topic of the piece ... more
I too appreciated that very much!
02/14/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
Alys...OMG that was an amazing start to what I hope will be a series? Please? I wanna know how and why she can understand her cat and who the heck is Aedan? Can I get one of my own?

I loved the simple descriptions and how it all seemed to flow. It was very easy to picture what was going on. It left me a bit breathless to be honest.
02/14/2011
Contributor: Alys Alys
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Alys...OMG that was an amazing start to what I hope will be a series? Please? I wanna know how and why she can understand her cat and who the heck is Aedan? Can I get one of my own?

I loved the simple descriptions and how it all seemed to ... more
Definitely a series! It'll be a little slow at first, but I have plans for Michele and Aedan... I am so glad that you enjoyed it, I tend to write for myself first and use descriptions that work for me, so it's good to know that it works for other people too!
02/14/2011
Contributor: SexyTabby SexyTabby
Alys, your story left me wanting to read more too. It's really good.
02/14/2011
Contributor: Jul!a Jul!a
Alys, I definitely look forward to reading the rest of that series.
02/14/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
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Originally posted by Alys
Definitely a series! It'll be a little slow at first, but I have plans for Michele and Aedan... I am so glad that you enjoyed it, I tend to write for myself first and use descriptions that work for me, so it's good to know that it works for ... more
I often find that the pieces I write for myself are better recieved that ones I write to suit someone else. It's almost like having a movie in your head and then describing it to someone else. It seems to come out more vivid and real if I write like that.
I have often thought that if we could speak to any other creature on the planet we wouldn't feel so alone, ya know? Then again we might discover truths about ourselves we might not really want to know....
02/14/2011
Contributor: Jul!a Jul!a
WomanChina, omg, your story is pretty much exactly what I look for in erotica.
02/14/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
Should we maybe start a topic catagory that sort of runs every month that is series continuations?
We'd choose two new topics a month and the third would be a chance for authors to continue a story that people find appealling. Does that sound like a good idea?
02/14/2011
Contributor: Alys Alys
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
I often find that the pieces I write for myself are better recieved that ones I write to suit someone else. It's almost like having a movie in your head and then describing it to someone else. It seems to come out more vivid and real if I write ... more
Talking to cats, I often thought would be interesting, but very humbling. I just like their personalities, and can imagine a sarcastic Dogbert-like side-kick, if we were ever able to communicate with them
02/14/2011
Contributor: Woman China Woman China
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Originally posted by Jul!a
WomanChina, omg, your story is pretty much exactly what I look for in erotica.
I shall pimp to you later more of them!!!! LOL!!!

There are going to be a total of four or five of the "Sharing is Caring" Series. at Work, at Home, at School are already all up.
02/14/2011
Contributor: Jul!a Jul!a
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Should we maybe start a topic catagory that sort of runs every month that is series continuations?
We'd choose two new topics a month and the third would be a chance for authors to continue a story that people find appealling. Does that sound ... more
I definitely think that would be a good idea. This way we don't have to worry about a story having to wait for the right category to continue.
02/14/2011
Contributor: Alys Alys
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Should we maybe start a topic catagory that sort of runs every month that is series continuations?
We'd choose two new topics a month and the third would be a chance for authors to continue a story that people find appealling. Does that sound ... more
I'd like that, though even if we don't do that, I'll be continuing my story.
02/14/2011
Contributor: SexyTabby SexyTabby
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Should we maybe start a topic catagory that sort of runs every month that is series continuations?
We'd choose two new topics a month and the third would be a chance for authors to continue a story that people find appealling. Does that sound ... more
Yes, it does that way series don't get lost in the new categories.
02/14/2011
Contributor: Jul!a Jul!a
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Originally posted by Woman China
I shall pimp to you later more of them!!!! LOL!!!

There are going to be a total of four or five of the "Sharing is Caring" Series. at Work, at Home, at School are already all up.
I will definitely be reading the rest of them
02/14/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
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Originally posted by Jul!a
WomanChina, omg, your story is pretty much exactly what I look for in erotica.
I know right? AMAZING! The descriptions were erotic as hell and it sounded like she was writing exactly what was going on at the time. I really like realism in my erotica and this hit on all cylinders.
02/14/2011
Contributor: Alys Alys
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Originally posted by Woman China
I shall pimp to you later more of them!!!! LOL!!!

There are going to be a total of four or five of the "Sharing is Caring" Series. at Work, at Home, at School are already all up.
They're very very hot! I can't wait to see where it goes from here
02/14/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
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Originally posted by SexyTabby
Yes, it does that way series don't get lost in the new categories.
That was my thought. I'd like to keep it fresh each month but also allow our writers the ability to continue something they are working on. I LOVE LOVE LOVE reading series work!
02/14/2011
Contributor: SexyTabby SexyTabby
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Originally posted by Woman China
I shall pimp to you later more of them!!!! LOL!!!

There are going to be a total of four or five of the "Sharing is Caring" Series. at Work, at Home, at School are already all up.
oh wait there is more - awesome. I really liked yours as well it's that little bit of class to go with our desires. It was really good.
02/14/2011
Contributor: Jul!a Jul!a
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
I know right? AMAZING! The descriptions were erotic as hell and it sounded like she was writing exactly what was going on at the time. I really like realism in my erotica and this hit on all cylinders.
I loved the exhibitionism touch to it the most. That is pretty much my all time top turn on, reading or seeing in porn. I love it, and stories that can capture that essence without being really over the top really get me going.
02/14/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
Wellit seems to be a concensus amoung us here that the one set topic each month is a good idea so let's put that into play for next month. Then all we have to do is choose two more topics.
02/14/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
Lauren's poem was very heartfelt and her grief came through in the poem. I liked that there was also a thread of hope running through it that she would see her friend again someday.
02/14/2011
Contributor: Gary Gary
Quote:
Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Should we maybe start a topic catagory that sort of runs every month that is series continuations?
We'd choose two new topics a month and the third would be a chance for authors to continue a story that people find appealling. Does that sound ... more
I like this idea!
02/14/2011
Contributor: Woman China Woman China
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Originally posted by Jul!a
I loved the exhibitionism touch to it the most. That is pretty much my all time top turn on, reading or seeing in porn. I love it, and stories that can capture that essence without being really over the top really get me going.
The entire series is about voyeurism and exhibitionism sprinkled with a little spice and thrill. I do feel it is important to bring what really does happen into my stories to make it more real for the reader. Besides.... what is sex and erotica without a little humour?
02/14/2011
Contributor: Woman China Woman China
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Wellit seems to be a concensus amoung us here that the one set topic each month is a good idea so let's put that into play for next month. Then all we have to do is choose two more topics.
What are all the topics so far?
02/14/2011