#EdenTasks - Proofreading Program

Contributor: BBW Talks Toys BBW Talks Toys
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Originally posted by Carrie Ann
It should not effect rankings. If it does, it is unfair, as only some people can be editors. Rank factors should be fair and equal for all.
awesome! thanks for answering that question.
11/27/2010
Contributor: BBW Talks Toys BBW Talks Toys
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Originally posted by Sir
Yeah, that sounds good. I mean, we already get hefty amounts of points for doing them, we don't need it to add to our rank as well.
I already think that this company is extremely generous. I honestly have never heard of a company that offers so much to its customers.
11/27/2010
Contributor: Sir Sir
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Originally posted by BBW Talks Toys
I already think that this company is extremely generous. I honestly have never heard of a company that offers so much to its customers.
I agree.


I need to ask something: is it alright that I put an editor's note on the review? Thank you!
11/27/2010
Contributor: Love Buzz Love Buzz
Quote:
Originally posted by Carrie Ann
It should not effect rankings. If it does, it is unfair, as only some people can be editors. Rank factors should be fair and equal for all.
I hope it won't affect people's rankings, I would seriously hate to lower the rank of someone who's helping me edit reviews due to my spelling differences.

Are mentors ranking affected by the reviews of their students?
11/28/2010
Contributor: Selective Sensualist Selective Sensualist
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Originally posted by Love Buzz
This is where I need to throw my personal 2cents worth in, just because I'd lie people to understand this one point.

cherryredhead88 has been wonderfully helping me with editing and proof reading, fixing up grammatical errors and many run ... more
Yeah, there are disagreements about the correct spellings of words that have more than one accepted spelling -- and I do not only mean the difference between what is considered "correct" in England, Canada, and Australia versus the U.S. (such as you see with the word color/colour, amongst many others). There are some words which happen to have more than one accepted form of spelling right here in the U.S.

To give one example, there is disagreement about the best spelling for judgment. In theology and law, it is spelled "judgment" (my preferred way of spelling it). Yet many people prefer to spell it "judgement" -- and this is considered to be acceptable. If you look it up in a dictionary, you will find that both spellings are listed. Interestingly enough, I have learned that most people -- even quite a few in academic settings -- are unaware that there is more than one acceptable spelling of this word. It would be wrong to "take off" for this in a review just because the editor chose to leave the reviewer's preferred spelling and the voter does not think that spelling is "correct."

Also, there are many words which people commonly misspell while vehemently asserting that the misspelling is correct. So you could have someone down-voting the editor's rating because they think a correctly spelled word is wrong. This happens a lot with homophones (words like discrete and discreet -- I see "discrete" wrongly used for "discreet" on a regular basis).

The majority of people do not have an inclination to scrupulously study grammar and spelling. (Perhaps those of us who actually do love this sort of thing are oddballs. )

Despite the fact that there are relatively few of us with strong grammarian inclinations, there is no shortage of people who like to try to correct others -- even if the spelling and grammar of what they are attempting to change is correct. It seems that "a little knowledge is dangerous" since they know a bit about grammar and think they are always right. I have seen people "correct" the grammar and spelling of others, changing it from something that was correct to something that is incorrect due to their misunderstanding and desire to criticize. (I have not seen this at EF yet, but I am afraid that this voting system may introduce this type of ugliness into the community.) These are the type of people who might pose problems voting on the editor's rating. This is why I am not so sure that having an open voting system for the editor's work is that helpful.

Voting on a review's usefulness to you is completely subjective -- you are the only person who can answer that question and you cannot negate someone's opinion. But voting on grammar and spelling is NOT subjective. Nor is it based upon opinion. It is completely objective. Why would you take votes from everyone and anyone when not anyone and everyone is good at grammar and spelling? It would be more logical if only other editors could vote, if there is to be any rating system on it at all. When it comes to objective assessments, any judgment (pun intended) of accuracy should come from someone who has mastered the material. You wouldn't give college essays to high school students to grade, for example.
11/28/2010
Contributor: sophie2229 sophie2229
Thanks for this new opportunity! I still have a few questions:
1. With regards to the "line" of too much/too little editing: What if the reviews have run-on sentences? Grammatically they're incorrect but changing them might be re-wording the reviewer's initial thought.

In the reviews that I've edited for the mentor program, I generally pointed them out in the comments section, but I wouldn't fix them myself. I'd either let the student do it (or if the student left it alone, I'd just published the review because I figured that's how the student wanted it to read. That being said, all of my students seem to be very good writers so 1 or 2 run-ons weren't a big deal).

2. Since the EF staff has never (to my knowledge) sent a review back to the student, I am still unclear as to when an editor *should* send the review back to the student.

3. If the reviewer missed something obvious should the reviewer put in an edit ie (edit from ___: Only use water based lubricant with silicone toys).

4. Why have editor rankings if they don't count towards your EF ranking?

I hope I'm selected for the program, it seems like a great idea!
11/28/2010
Contributor: Kindred Kindred
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Originally posted by sophie2229
Thanks for this new opportunity! I still have a few questions:
1. With regards to the "line" of too much/too little editing: What if the reviews have run-on sentences? Grammatically they're incorrect but changing them might be ... more
This is obviously just my opinion, but:

1. The function of the editor is to correct the review grammatically and to ensure it reads well. If you can correct a run-on sentence while still preserving the voice of the author, I think it would be fine to do so. However, if you feel you can not, there is always the option to send the review back to the author with a comment asking to correct the run-on.

2. Based on the Editor's Guidelines, you should send a review back to the author when it is so full of errors that it is difficult to read.

3. I would say no to adding information as an editor into a review. The function of an editor is simply for grammar, not content. That would be the job of a mentor.
11/28/2010
Contributor: BBW Talks Toys BBW Talks Toys
Quote:
Originally posted by sophie2229
Thanks for this new opportunity! I still have a few questions:
1. With regards to the "line" of too much/too little editing: What if the reviews have run-on sentences? Grammatically they're incorrect but changing them might be ... more
Regarding #4, I think several people here answered this question, but I'll just reiterate what they've said.

Our EF ranking is based on something that everyone in the community has the ability to do, you can read it in the ranking guidelines.

Since everyone cannot be an editor, then it shouldn't affect ranking, as it isn't something that everyone can participate in.

I would imagine, and admins should feel free to correct me if I'm misinterpreting this, that the voting on the usefulness of the editors is like a "peer review" system that one might have at a job. If 50 people read a review that wasn't edited correctly and vote "poor" on the editor, then obviously they aren't doing their job and should have the ability to perform this task taken away. (Possibly because they are point farming or something)
11/28/2010
Contributor: sophie2229 sophie2229
Makes sense - I just asked about the adding of info because the Eden staff has been known to do that occasionally if a reviewer recommends something that is unsafe.
11/28/2010
Contributor: Kindred Kindred
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Originally posted by sophie2229
Makes sense - I just asked about the adding of info because the Eden staff has been known to do that occasionally if a reviewer recommends something that is unsafe.
You could send it back to the reviewer if there is something unsafe written in the review and ask for an edit. But placing a comment in the review, at least to me, seems beyond the bounds of an editor. I think reviewers would appreciate this as it hopefully makes their review better.
11/28/2010
Contributor: Viktor Vysheslav Malkin Viktor Vysheslav Malkin
I think it is a testament to the community, even though we have differing opinions, we all remained civil! Its great! I been around other communities where speaking your mind, right or wrong would get your head ripped off and you banned. Thankfully I do not participate in those communities anymore.

I think we have a lot of good suggestions. I feel bad for the staff, when they come back Monday they are going to have a lot of Good suggestions to go through, suppose that is not a bad thing.
11/28/2010
Contributor: P'Gell P'Gell
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Originally posted by Selective Sensualist
When I was in the mentor program, I never had my reviews edited by my mentors (i.e., there were never any suggestions for changing grammar, punctuation, nor spelling on any of the reviews that I submitted). However, those reviews are now showing up ... more
Yeah, I am wondering "How can we vote on the "Editor" if we haven't seen the review before the editing was done?" How much work the Editor does is dependent on how good and accurate and well written the review was before the Editor got it. Right?
11/28/2010
Contributor: P'Gell P'Gell
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Originally posted by Viktor Vysheslav Malkin
Here is a couple thoughts and proposals to the Eden Staff.

Why not be very selective. You stated not everyone will be accepted, and I like this. However, if you are going to be very selective, then why do we need the vote? If you put these ... more
I agree. I also agree that voting on the editor at all, much less the editors of older reviews will NOT be of much help. I don't really see the point of voting on editors, unless it's to decide who to keep in the program.

I'm not quite sure how one is supposed to know how much work an editor did. Unless the editing job was awful, there really is no reason to "vote" on editing jobs. IMO.
11/28/2010
Contributor: cherryredhead88 cherryredhead88
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Originally posted by Selective Sensualist
Yeah, there are disagreements about the correct spellings of words that have more than one accepted spelling -- and I do not only mean the difference between what is considered "correct" in England, Canada, and Australia versus the U.S. ... more
I completely agree with you here! I consider myself to be good in grammar and spelling, but I still did not know the judgement (judgment?) thing you said. In fact now I don't even remember how I spelled it, but firefox says that judgement is the wrong spelling... heh.


Anyways, I feel that the requirements for editors should include that they are open minded and try to be as objective as possible. Like a few others have mentioned, the task of the editors is to simply revise for grammar and spelling, not content. That is for the mentors.

The only challenge I can see myself facing as an editor is simply the spelling differences that have been talked about. Thanks to LoveBuzz I have been reminded that the way I learned to spell isn't the only way! Fortunately I am one of those with an open mind, and I think everyone should have their own voice and opinion.

I guess it will come down to if the word(s) in question will be readable and understandable. Like I know that colour is the same as color. But if someone spelled something "lyke dis I wood have a hird time wth it"

Lol I can't even think of ways to spell stuff wrong.


The more I read through our ideas the more I think that voting on editing is irrelevant. I'm hoping that it's just part of the test phase.

I feel like an ass now for voting "good" on some of them, I don't think I will be voting on them anymore.
11/28/2010
Contributor: ToyGeek ToyGeek
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Originally posted by Selective Sensualist
Yeah, there are disagreements about the correct spellings of words that have more than one accepted spelling -- and I do not only mean the difference between what is considered "correct" in England, Canada, and Australia versus the U.S. ... more
I definitely second this concern. I have a couple of hundred pieces of fanfiction on the Internet, with anonymous feedback forms attached, and I get those kinds of incorrect "suggestions" almost daily, from people who are absolutely positive they are correct.
11/28/2010
Contributor: Viktor Vysheslav Malkin Viktor Vysheslav Malkin
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Originally posted by cherryredhead88
I completely agree with you here! I consider myself to be good in grammar and spelling, but I still did not know the judgement (judgment?) thing you said. In fact now I don't even remember how I spelled it, but firefox says that judgement is the ... more
I really feel bad when you are not comfortable voting.

If anyone votes Good or has voted Good on my editing process I have no problem with it, it still means I did a Good job

I was a little caught off guard by the whole voting thing when I published a review, wasn't expecting it, plus I am not an editor so it confused me. Never was angry about any votes I received though. If I would have known about the whole knew editing program I may have tried to edit minor grammatical errors, but at the time, I did not know what they deal was with it. I just thought it was weird that I could edit my students reviews.
11/28/2010
Contributor: Tori Rebel Tori Rebel
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Originally posted by P'Gell
I agree. I also agree that voting on the editor at all, much less the editors of older reviews will NOT be of much help. I don't really see the point of voting on editors, unless it's to decide who to keep in the program.

I'm not ... more
I agree with this. Since there's no way to know what an editor really did, it's hard to rate. I also think that people will end up voting some editors low for not-so-great reviews, even though the editor can't change, add, or remove information from them.
11/28/2010
Contributor: Tuesday Tuesday
I have a question about the self-publishing aspect of this new program. I just finished my Lip Service review. There's now an option to select a category for a review item if the system couldn't automatically figure it out. Among the options are Erotic Video and Adult DVD.

What's the difference?

I chose Adult DVD and the review didn't auto-publish, just to answer someone's earlier question about that.
11/28/2010
Contributor: Tori Rebel Tori Rebel
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Originally posted by Tuesday
I have a question about the self-publishing aspect of this new program. I just finished my Lip Service review. There's now an option to select a category for a review item if the system couldn't automatically figure it out. Among the options ... more
I'm really not sure what the difference is. My best guess would be that erotic videos are the more sensual, less sexual, DVDs? More softcore, couple friendly things? Whereas Adult DVD would just be porn? Bear in mind this is just my thought though, maybe someone from EF staff can clarify this on Monday?
11/28/2010
Contributor: SexyTabby SexyTabby
I don't get the voting on editors...what's the purpose? How can we know if they did a good, excellent or poor job if we never saw the original to compare their work? Seems odd to me because we don't have any idea what changes they have made to the review. We only know what we see and don't know if it's ok because the author did well or the editor corrected it. I'm confuzzled (and yes that's a made up word I use often lol).
11/28/2010
Contributor: El-Jaro El-Jaro
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Originally posted by Tuesday
I have a question about the self-publishing aspect of this new program. I just finished my Lip Service review. There's now an option to select a category for a review item if the system couldn't automatically figure it out. Among the options ... more
That's a tech issue we've dealt with from time to time. It's related to the not-assigned reviews not auto-publishing.

When this is the case, send an email to partners@edenfantasys. com and let us know.

Adult DVD's are porno's. Sensual/Erotic videos are like "how to" or exercise videos.
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It's not ok to add more info to someone's review, even if you think it would be useful.

Also, do NOT send back a person's review for not having measurements or something that is found on the product page. That's akin to hijacking someone's review and is just a dick move.

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If you find a problem with a review or a glitch in the programming, email partners@edenfantasys. com and let us know.

This community rawks!
11/28/2010
Contributor: Sir Sir
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Originally posted by El-Jaro
That's a tech issue we've dealt with from time to time. It's related to the not-assigned reviews not auto-publishing.

When this is the case, send an email to partners@edenfantasys. com and let us know.

Adult DVD's are ... more
I wanted to ask about something that wasn't really responded to.

I personally did not add more information, but the person suggested the use of suspension with bondage tape, and I made an editor's note saying: "Note: Use of this product for suspension is not recommended. Use with caution," or something of that sort. Is that alright for us to do? I remember that the editors used to add those things into the review without adding or omitting information in order to keep the individual's work still there.
11/28/2010
Contributor: Viktor Vysheslav Malkin Viktor Vysheslav Malkin
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Originally posted by Sir
I wanted to ask about something that wasn't really responded to.

I personally did not add more information, but the person suggested the use of suspension with bondage tape, and I made an editor's note saying: "Note: Use of this ... more
That is a great question, I can see things like this coming up quite often. Very good question Sir!
11/28/2010
Contributor: PussyGalore PussyGalore
This is amazing. I look forward to earning my way into the program one day.
11/28/2010
Contributor: VanillaFreeSex VanillaFreeSex
I love to proofread. I am looking forward to having the opportunity to participate in this new program.
11/28/2010
Contributor: SexyTabby SexyTabby
Okay, when I saw this thread I thought it was great because I've seen so many reviews with incorrect information and bad recommendations on them not to mention grammatical errors. Now I'm not to sure it's so great. If there aren't corrections to the errors with the exception of grammar then one has to ask if there is a down side.

The errors that matter will still be present (I think Sir touched on this with the editors note). Also something to think about is that in some cases the writers personality will come out in the typing and just because it isn't correct English it may be adjusted removing the authors personality. My concern is without the individuals personality the reviews could become generic and cold which would seem to defeat the purpose at Eden. Fixing the correct usage of the word their, there or they're and changing alot to a lot is completely different from changing a sentence that is written the way an individual envisions it.

If I say 'I won't be doing that' that's just my personality and not correct grammar but it's just me. Correcting it to 'I will not do that' is grammatically correct however it looses that lil umpf that made it personal and real.

Just putting it out there...
11/28/2010
Contributor: Sir Sir
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Originally posted by SexyTabby
Okay, when I saw this thread I thought it was great because I've seen so many reviews with incorrect information and bad recommendations on them not to mention grammatical errors. Now I'm not to sure it's so great. If there aren't ... more
No, we're not changing the voice at all. I am not understanding why so many people have mentioned this. All that we are changing is proper conjunctions, use of commas, and sentence breaks. Grammatical errors, not the difference between "don't" and "do not."
11/28/2010
Contributor: Tori Rebel Tori Rebel
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Originally posted by Sir
No, we're not changing the voice at all. I am not understanding why so many people have mentioned this. All that we are changing is proper conjunctions, use of commas, and sentence breaks. Grammatical errors, not the difference between ... more
Agreed.

So far I've changed the last letter(s) of a few words to make proper subject/verb agreement, changed a few slang (text message type language, as mentioned in editorial guidelines) words to "real" words, added or removed spaces, corrected punctuation, capitalization, spelling and usage (it's vs. its, discreet vs. discrete), but that's all. I don't think any of this changes the tone or personality of the review.

Sir- I've noticed you've edited quite a few, are these the same things you're running into?
11/28/2010
Contributor: Alicia Alicia
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Originally posted by Tori Rebel
Agreed.

So far I've changed the last letter(s) of a few words to make proper subject/verb agreement, changed a few slang (text message type language, as mentioned in editorial guidelines) words to "real" words, added or removed ... more
I'm wondering if I am looking in the correct place or maybe I'm just missing when reviews are available to edit. I'm going under "Task Market" but haven't seen anything available but have seen a lot coming out having been edited so I'm not sure if I'm just missing them each time or what.

On the two I did edit though those were the types of things I was finding too, and don't think anything I changed affected the writer's voice.
11/28/2010
Contributor: Selective Sensualist Selective Sensualist
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Originally posted by SexyTabby
Okay, when I saw this thread I thought it was great because I've seen so many reviews with incorrect information and bad recommendations on them not to mention grammatical errors. Now I'm not to sure it's so great. If there aren't ... more
When I edit others' work, the examples that you described are the types of things that I always leave intact. Besides, there is nothing wrong with using contractions in an informal document, such as a review.

The editor should not change sentence structure, but should instead just make the necessary corrections in spelling and punctuation to get the author's point across clearly. For example, while it is grammatically incorrect to end sentences with a preposition, I would not change the sentence structure of a review I am editing if the author ended the sentence with the word "to," "in," or "for" -- even though it is not grammatically correct. As long as the reader can follow the author's point clearly, then sentence structure and wording should stand -- even if the editor knows it violates a grammar rule. The majority of people do end an occasional sentence in a preposition and, in our modern society, not doing so can make the language sound stilted (but this rule was so thoroughly pounded into my head during grade school and middle school that I feel compelled to follow that rule in my own writing).

Some examples of what I consider to be acceptable corrections include replacing the word "discrete" when the context suggests that the author actually meant "discreet." I would change it to the proper spelling because these homophones have vastly different meanings -- and "discrete" does not make sense in the context in which it is often placed. I would change "it's" to "its" when the author is using it as a possessive (like his, her, and my) and change "its" to "it's" when s/he is trying to communicate the conjunction "it is."

When editing is done well, the author's voice and tone are preserved, but the text is easier to read; plus, it is easier to understand what the author is trying to say without bogging the reader down with deciphering the meaning from improper punctuation and misspellings.

An editor should change as little as possible.
11/28/2010