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#EdenLit - March Meeting 3/12/2012 @7pm EST

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Contributor: Woman China Woman China
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
You could use your new blender and make a nice stiff drink!
Rum, Coffee, ice, more rum.... I'll make ze rum balls and ze coffee punch!!!
03/12/2012
Contributor: Destri Destri
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Originally posted by Woman China
I really enjoyed your Airen darling. Being taken into a whole different world and seeing the world through your eyes, and also seeing the world through your eyes as a wolf.

Very challenging and an interesting read.
I agree, I had to read it twice to make sure of what was going on. And I really like when a story makes me pay attention.
03/12/2012
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
More may wander in but some of our members are actually skipping this meeting due to family commitments
03/12/2012
Contributor: Woman China Woman China
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Originally posted by Ansley
Is this the whole group?
There usually is a few more, but they are being tardy.

Send them to detention. We can then be the Breakfast Club!!!
03/12/2012
Contributor: Destri Destri
Cedarloonman said he couldn't make it. I don't know about sexytexasmama...
03/12/2012
Contributor: Cedarlooman Cedarlooman
I'm here but I am onlyba little tardy and I.made my own Hall Pass.
03/12/2012
Contributor: Woman China Woman China
And as I said Airen darling in the comments, I liked how your wolf spoke about object and tried to think of the human words. I have always thought that was neat about stories with an animal as the main character.
03/12/2012
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
Quote:
Originally posted by Woman China
I really enjoyed your Airen darling. Being taken into a whole different world and seeing the world through your eyes, and also seeing the world through your eyes as a wolf.

Very challenging and an interesting read.
LOL was supposed to be a cat as in a were-human cat rather than wolf. It is damn difficult to show this in First person though!
03/12/2012
Contributor: Destri Destri
Hi! Glad to see you here, Cedar!
03/12/2012
Contributor: Jul!a Jul!a
Hello! Sorry I am late, I was having internet difficulties.
03/12/2012
Contributor: Cedarlooman Cedarlooman
Oh and am on my phone so posting blind as well. Let the typist ensue. Full speed ahead and Damn the Spelling Nazis!
03/12/2012
Contributor: Destri Destri
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
LOL was supposed to be a cat as in a were-human cat rather than wolf. It is damn difficult to show this in First person though!
I actually was sort of waiting to see what kind of animal it was...
03/12/2012
Contributor: Ansley Ansley
Many of you may have already seen the Eden Community Chronicle on the forums. The purpose of the Chronicle is to be an all-inclusive thread where people can find out what's going on in the industry, what's going on in the world of sex in general and most importantly, what's going on here at Eden.

SexIs is now open to the community and we would like to do the same with the Chronicle. Thus far, I have been the one selecting the pieces written by EdenLit to include in my monthly postings. We thought we'd shake things up a bit and see what everyone thinks about this idea:

In addition to your current themes selected by Airen and the community along with the free write category, how would you feel about a topic specific to the Chronicle? That is, I submit a topic to Airen and you will have a month to write on said topic if you wish and all pieces written for the topic will be included in the Chronicle.
03/12/2012
Contributor: Jul!a Jul!a
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Originally posted by Woman China
Rum, Coffee, ice, more rum.... I'll make ze rum balls and ze coffee punch!!!
Haha, swap coffee for fruit and you have most of the drinks I had last night!
03/12/2012
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
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Originally posted by Jul!a
Hello! Sorry I am late, I was having internet difficulties.
S'ok you made it that's all that matters!
03/12/2012
Contributor: Woman China Woman China
Destri's story, I thought was very vivid in your descriptions. Many times people who write, don't always stop to smell the flowers or to appreciate the uniqueness of common every day things.

I really appreciated your metaphors and descriptions. For me, that is what makes a story.

But I suffer from verbal diarrhea.
03/12/2012
Contributor: Destri Destri
Oh Stormy, that is very exciting! I would love to give that a try
03/12/2012
Contributor: Destri Destri
Thank you, Woman! I love to see the everyday things and put them into stories.
03/12/2012
Contributor: Woman China Woman China
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Originally posted by Ansley
Many of you may have already seen the Eden Community Chronicle on the forums. The purpose of the Chronicle is to be an all-inclusive thread where people can find out what's going on in the industry, what's going on in the world of sex in ... more
Can you give us an example?

I might still be partially asleep.
03/12/2012
Contributor: Woman China Woman China
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Originally posted by Jul!a
Haha, swap coffee for fruit and you have most of the drinks I had last night!
Pretty Lady!!! Hello!!!

Ohhh... next time? Take pictures and email me!!! I miss fancy beverages!!!
03/12/2012
Contributor: Cedarlooman Cedarlooman
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Originally posted by Ansley
Many of you may have already seen the Eden Community Chronicle on the forums. The purpose of the Chronicle is to be an all-inclusive thread where people can find out what's going on in the industry, what's going on in the world of sex in ... more
That sounds interesting. I wouldn't mind getting mire exposure for the group.
03/12/2012
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
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Originally posted by Ansley
Many of you may have already seen the Eden Community Chronicle on the forums. The purpose of the Chronicle is to be an all-inclusive thread where people can find out what's going on in the industry, what's going on in the world of sex in ... more
I think it could be fun! Having a whole month to write about a site wide topic could get interesting. What are the guidelines for the submissions? How long, how short, how erotic? ect.
03/12/2012
Contributor: Ansley Ansley
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Originally posted by Destri
Oh Stormy, that is very exciting! I would love to give that a try
Fabulous! Everything for EdenLit still stands, it's just in addition to what you already have going on, submissions can be poems, essays---whatever you want.
03/12/2012
Contributor: Woman China Woman China
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Originally posted by Cedarlooman
I'm here but I am onlyba little tardy and I.made my own Hall Pass.
Welcome and goodmorning/night/day/ evening... Greetings!
03/12/2012
Contributor: Woman China Woman China
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Originally posted by Ansley
Fabulous! Everything for EdenLit still stands, it's just in addition to what you already have going on, submissions can be poems, essays---whatever you want.
Oh. So basically we'd have four topics rather than three????
03/12/2012
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
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Originally posted by Woman China
Destri's story, I thought was very vivid in your descriptions. Many times people who write, don't always stop to smell the flowers or to appreciate the uniqueness of common every day things.

I really appreciated your metaphors and ... more
I totally agree with you Woman! Her descriptions were amazing.

Speaking of that did you find it hard to remain in only one person's viewpoint Destri?
03/12/2012
Contributor: Woman China Woman China
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Originally posted by Destri
Thank you, Woman! I love to see the everyday things and put them into stories.
And putting them into stories in various ways to make them interesting. Like your use of the moon and the violin for example.

Your writing is good. I'm keen to see more.
03/12/2012
Contributor: Jul!a Jul!a
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Originally posted by Woman China
Pretty Lady!!! Hello!!!

Ohhh... next time? Take pictures and email me!!! I miss fancy beverages!!!
I will have to take more pictures next time!

If you find me on Facebook, that's where they usually get posted.
03/12/2012
Contributor: Destri Destri
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
I totally agree with you Woman! Her descriptions were amazing.

Speaking of that did you find it hard to remain in only one person's viewpoint Destri?
funny you should ask... I thought I was rolling right along, and then you pointed out that I slipped into narrative. I never even noticed. So. I guess the answer is yes... and no.
03/12/2012
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
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Originally posted by Woman China
Oh. So basically we'd have four topics rather than three????
We could do that or trial dropping the open topic...that's up to you guys
03/12/2012