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#EdenLit - December meeting: December 12th at 7pm EST

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Contributor: Jul!a Jul!a
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
OK guys we do actually have some things we need to discuss about the club and the book project.

First of all, for those of you who have work going into the book. Do you want a chance to go over the work in question or do you think it's ... more
I think the editors can have at mine.
12/12/2011
Contributor: Cedarlooman Cedarlooman
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Originally posted by Cedarlooman
Very hot. I liked the setup and the scenario. It did seesm like the guy went along a little quikly...and her too but it was very hot. I would have liked to see more! It was very hot nd the pcing was good. The scenario would be pretty hot to roleplay!
Damn...did I mention it was hot? LOL
12/12/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
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Originally posted by Cedarlooman
Very hot. I liked the setup and the scenario. It did seesm like the guy went along a little quikly...and her too but it was very hot. I would have liked to see more! It was very hot nd the pcing was good. The scenario would be pretty hot to roleplay!
The premis was that they had agreed to this earlier...answered an ad or something. I guess that didn't really come through.
12/12/2011
Contributor: Antipova Antipova
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
OK guys we do actually have some things we need to discuss about the club and the book project.

First of all, for those of you who have work going into the book. Do you want a chance to go over the work in question or do you think it's ... more
I'll trust the editors, for my part.
12/12/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
KK I'll contact the other authors individually and then we'll get these things turned in so the magic can begin LOL
12/12/2011
Contributor: Cedarlooman Cedarlooman
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
The premis was that they had agreed to this earlier...answered an ad or something. I guess that didn't really come through.
I think i caught that. I just thought they had agreed to go but didn't know what was going to hsppen.
12/12/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
Secondly: Do we want to keep the club as it is or focus a bit more on critical review of the work? We have the opportunity to expand our horizons and actually begin to learn about writing. How interested in that concept are we?
12/12/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
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Originally posted by Cedarlooman
I think i caught that. I just thought they had agreed to go but didn't know what was going to hsppen.
You know that works too I suppose...his words were that the couple had agreed to the night but were surprised and if they balked something sinister would happen.
12/12/2011
Contributor: Cedarlooman Cedarlooman
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
KK I'll contact the other authors individually and then we'll get these things turned in so the magic can begin LOL
I think mine is okay. The only thing i would maybe change is that she scoops it into her mouth instead of his before they kiss at the end. But it dorsn't have to. I think that is actually kinfa a fantasy of a lot of girls...to feed it to the guy.
12/12/2011
Contributor: Jul!a Jul!a
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Secondly: Do we want to keep the club as it is or focus a bit more on critical review of the work? We have the opportunity to expand our horizons and actually begin to learn about writing. How interested in that concept are we?
I do like how it is, but I'd also like to try and critique work as well, even if I suck at doing much more than "I really liked that."
12/12/2011
Contributor: kadytheredpanda kadytheredpanda
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
OK guys we do actually have some things we need to discuss about the club and the book project.

First of all, for those of you who have work going into the book. Do you want a chance to go over the work in question or do you think it's ... more
I'm fine with the editors looking at it.
12/12/2011
Contributor: Antipova Antipova
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Secondly: Do we want to keep the club as it is or focus a bit more on critical review of the work? We have the opportunity to expand our horizons and actually begin to learn about writing. How interested in that concept are we?
I am, for one. And maybe instead of two topics and a free topic, we could have one topic, one story that lets us focus on the skill we're featuring, and still the free one.
12/12/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
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Originally posted by Jul!a
I do like how it is, but I'd also like to try and critique work as well, even if I suck at doing much more than "I really liked that."
We could have people volunteer their work for critique rather than just do that for everyone...just an idea for the more timid and sensitive.
12/12/2011
Contributor: Cedarlooman Cedarlooman
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Secondly: Do we want to keep the club as it is or focus a bit more on critical review of the work? We have the opportunity to expand our horizons and actually begin to learn about writing. How interested in that concept are we?
This could be interesting. I know i learned a lot in my first couple of stories by running them past critical reviewers (until they stopped in the middle to wank) and then with an actual volunteer editor from the site. He gave me a lot of tips and didn't pull punches in his critiques.
12/12/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
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Originally posted by Antipova
I am, for one. And maybe instead of two topics and a free topic, we could have one topic, one story that lets us focus on the skill we're featuring, and still the free one.
That could work as well...what do you guys think?
12/12/2011
Contributor: Jul!a Jul!a
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
We could have people volunteer their work for critique rather than just do that for everyone...just an idea for the more timid and sensitive.
Ooh, also a very good idea.
12/12/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
That could work as well...what do you guys think?
Expanding on this idea and my other one....we could have one of the topics be a critical focus and leave the other two alone. Then people who just want to write wouldn't feel pressured.
12/12/2011
Contributor: Jul!a Jul!a
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Expanding on this idea and my other one....we could have one of the topics be a critical focus and leave the other two alone. Then people who just want to write wouldn't feel pressured.
I am very in support of this.
12/12/2011
Contributor: Antipova Antipova
Quote:
Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Expanding on this idea and my other one....we could have one of the topics be a critical focus and leave the other two alone. Then people who just want to write wouldn't feel pressured.
Agree.
12/12/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
The reason I am bring up the critiquing idea is Rayne is concerned that we are defeating ourselves with the search engines because we aren't always writing over 300 words per submission. If we are going to critique a story it would need to be something we can really sink our teeth into!
12/12/2011
Contributor: Cedarlooman Cedarlooman
Oh and if you want help editing and/or organizing the sections i would be happy to volunteer.
12/12/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
As a topic of interest we will be able to draw from the other clubs some of our topics as well as from the Eden Cafe. The kink club has agreed to share their topics with us if we would like to explore the same topics then we are welcome to! This was another idea Rayne presented as the Kink Club manager...let's face it our club and hers just seems to go hand in hand LOL
12/12/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
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Originally posted by Cedarlooman
Oh and if you want help editing and/or organizing the sections i would be happy to volunteer.
I elieve gary is handling that aspect but if we need volunteers I will certainly be emailing you
12/12/2011
Contributor: Cedarlooman Cedarlooman
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Originally posted by Antipova
Agree.
Tritto.
12/12/2011
Contributor: Cedarlooman Cedarlooman
Quote:
Originally posted by Airen Wolf
As a topic of interest we will be able to draw from the other clubs some of our topics as well as from the Eden Cafe. The kink club has agreed to share their topics with us if we would like to explore the same topics then we are welcome to! This was ... more
That they do. But how do you all write a story in less than 300 words? I think my poem is pushing that!
12/12/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
The topics we chose last month for january are:
Starting over
New Beginnings
Choices

Which one should be our critical focus?
12/12/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
Quote:
Originally posted by Cedarlooman
That they do. But how do you all write a story in less than 300 words? I think my poem is pushing that!
I....have...no....idea ! The thought of keeping it under 300 words gives me nightmares. My reviews take so long because of all the words I have to remove from each one!
12/12/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
I....have...no....idea ! The thought of keeping it under 300 words gives me nightmares. My reviews take so long because of all the words I have to remove from each one!
I should also say that poetry is exempt from the 300 word minimum. Some of the best poetry is certainly less than 300 words!
12/12/2011
Contributor: Jul!a Jul!a
Quote:
Originally posted by Airen Wolf
The topics we chose last month for january are:
Starting over
New Beginnings
Choices

Which one should be our critical focus?
Hmmm, my vote is for choices.
12/12/2011
Contributor: Antipova Antipova
Quote:
Originally posted by Airen Wolf
The topics we chose last month for january are:
Starting over
New Beginnings
Choices

Which one should be our critical focus?
New Beginnings, of course! Because we're beginning critiquing!
12/12/2011