#EdenLit Meeting - (01.2013) Change Is Inevitable But Welcome!

Contributor: *Ashley* *Ashley*
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Originally posted by Lickable Lollie
kinda bummed that you're the only one who commented on my poems, Airen!
She is the only one to comment on my as well. She's just awesome.
01/14/2013
Contributor: *Ashley* *Ashley*
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Originally posted by Loriandhubby
i would love to work on stuff like..

how articles are different than essays. How to effectively write an article that does not leave the reader hanging. .. I guess that is how you say it.
Me too!
01/14/2013
Contributor: Lickable Lollie Lickable Lollie
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Originally posted by *Ashley*
She is the only one to comment on my as well. She's just awesome.
Did you post anything this month?
01/14/2013
Contributor: *Ashley* *Ashley*
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Originally posted by Lickable Lollie
Did you post anything this month?
Yes. I'm on page 5 of this forum. Here it is:

Scarlet Theriot was wise beyond her years,
First love and Heartbreak helped her get there.
Dean Lancaster ended up bringing her to tears,
How could this happen; this is so unfair.

The first time she give her heart up,
She was a young school girl.
Impress the boy she thought "buy a push-up",
He will be sure to give this girl a whirl.

Unknowing to Scarlet; Dean was more interested in fame,
making a bet with his best friend Drake Shepherd.
This is not only a bet but a hard love game,
"Bet you I can make her my lovebird".

Scarlets wildest dreams came true,
Her first love loves her too.
Oh if she only had a clue,
His love for her was untrue.

Less than 24 hours goes by,
Drake was Scarlets friend too.
How guilty he felt when he made her cry,
Drake knew he needed to fix this issue.

Now with a scolded heart and hard lessons learned,
She's now stronger and wiser than ever.
So thank you Dean for leaving me burned,
You ended up being nothing but a buster.

Scarlet is now wise beyond her heart,
Play hard to get she had to learn.
It's a good start,
Put a stop to this heartbreak pattern.
01/16/2013
Contributor: *Ashley* *Ashley*
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Yes you can BUT do not post the work here on the forum or it will be disqualified. Just drop me a note by either email or IM and I'll help all I can.
So I couldn't use the poem I just wrote on here?

**Never mind. I found the answer in the forum.**
01/16/2013
Contributor: *Ashley* *Ashley*
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
hmmmmm could this be some of our Champagne's very own work? I think it would fit with her darker out look and show the contrast to how finally falling slightly in love can change your outlook....
Based on my first boyfriend. Hard lesson learned early in life.
I glad it came out well.
02/11/2013