#EdenLit Meeting - (01.2013) Change Is Inevitable But Welcome!

Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
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Originally posted by Lickable Lollie
they almost smell like marijuana to me...not that...i know what pot...smells like... -cough-
oh NO why would you EVER know that pot smells like fresh grass when it is good quality and like old stale oregano when it's not?
01/14/2013
Contributor: Lickable Lollie Lickable Lollie
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
oh NO why would you EVER know that pot smells like fresh grass when it is good quality and like old stale oregano when it's not?
Posts like these are why EF needs a like button lol
01/14/2013
Contributor: Lickable Lollie Lickable Lollie
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
I'll color what I post outside of the story just so it's easier for me to compile the thing later! Any questions before we begin?
Are we writing PARTS of the story and continuing on from what the previous poster wrote? Or are we each writing our own completely different story?
01/14/2013
Contributor: SneakersAndPearls SneakersAndPearls
Sorry, sorry. Had stuff happening. Here now.
01/14/2013
Contributor: *Ashley* *Ashley*
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
I'll color what I post outside of the story just so it's easier for me to compile the thing later! Any questions before we begin?
That will make it easy. (you being in color). I'll chime in as we go along. I'm the 'play the game and figure it out as you go' type.
01/14/2013
Contributor: *Ashley* *Ashley*
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Originally posted by Lickable Lollie
Posts like these are why EF needs a like button lol
I agree... ha-ha
01/14/2013
Contributor: *Ashley* *Ashley*
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Originally posted by Lickable Lollie
Posts like these are why EF needs a like button lol
I agree... ha-ha
01/14/2013
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
Ok I'll begin this shin dig:

Champagne Dellarose knew that her parents were hopeless. Look at the name they had hung around her neck when she was too small to properly protest! With a last name like Dellarose ANY name was going to sound like it belonged in a trashy romance novel. having a mother that actually wrote trashy romance novels made the whole moniker a cruel joke.
For this reason Cham was changing her name just as soon as she was financially able to! She had tried to live with it. She had tried "Page" but people started calling her "Pagne". It would have been ok if it didn't sound like "Pain". So Cham it was...just like her life. A big old hollow sham. She was nearly 20 years old and had never been kissed despite the best efforts of her overly romantic minded mother.

Cham stood in the grocery aisle looking sourly at the newest offering from the mind of her mother. it was a sappy sob story about a wild west heroine who just needed a rugged cowboy type to sweep in and make everything all better. Cham was sure that bodices were going to be ripped and set ablaze all described in flowery overly sensationalized words. Who actually read this crap?
01/14/2013
Contributor: Lickable Lollie Lickable Lollie
umm...so....I guess that means we're all writing our own stories?


Oops nevermind lol
01/14/2013
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
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Originally posted by Lickable Lollie
Are we writing PARTS of the story and continuing on from what the previous poster wrote? Or are we each writing our own completely different story?
It can be either way...you can continue the story or write your own and we'll find a way to make it work! As long as it's all about that first few minutes of new love then it works!
01/14/2013
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
I just got to thinking and maybe this month we can choose a topic and when I make the forum for the meeting we can take that whole week and add our idea to the forum and then sort of fit the pieces into a nice story during the meeting. Could be fun!

I'd also like to start one to two sentence stories or poems that we can write during the meetings. Just some thoughts...
01/14/2013
Contributor: Lickable Lollie Lickable Lollie
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
I just got to thinking and maybe this month we can choose a topic and when I make the forum for the meeting we can take that whole week and add our idea to the forum and then sort of fit the pieces into a nice story during the meeting. Could be ... more
I like that idea a lot better. It's hard for me to do impromptu writing. I was just sitting here staring blankly at the screen trying to figure out what to write...that never happens to me. Lol.
01/14/2013
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
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Originally posted by Lickable Lollie
I like that idea a lot better. It's hard for me to do impromptu writing. I was just sitting here staring blankly at the screen trying to figure out what to write...that never happens to me. Lol.
Try this: Pick a name from the list and think about what your first experience with love was...then write a poem about it. Just let the words flow. This doesn't have to be prize winning material here!
01/14/2013
Contributor: *Ashley* *Ashley*
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Originally posted by Lickable Lollie
I like that idea a lot better. It's hard for me to do impromptu writing. I was just sitting here staring blankly at the screen trying to figure out what to write...that never happens to me. Lol.
I was doing the same thing.. lol.
01/14/2013
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
OH also before I forget and Stormy has to prod me in the buttocks...we are going to be doing a series of workshops in collaboration with SexIs. The workshops will be aimed at improving writing skill, choosing appropriate topics and writing non-fiction. We'll also be offering a few workshops on writing fiction if the interest is there to support the effort! So if you have been wanting to submit some work to SexIs magazine but are unsure what at to write about or even how to write it stay tuned!
01/14/2013
Contributor: *Ashley* *Ashley*
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Try this: Pick a name from the list and think about what your first experience with love was...then write a poem about it. Just let the words flow. This doesn't have to be prize winning material here!
I'll wing it and see what happens..... lol.
01/14/2013
Contributor: *Ashley* *Ashley*
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
OH also before I forget and Stormy has to prod me in the buttocks...we are going to be doing a series of workshops in collaboration with SexIs. The workshops will be aimed at improving writing skill, choosing appropriate topics and writing ... more
**off topic here** Speaking of SexIs I'm not getting mine anymore.
01/14/2013
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
Ok folks let's get the work posted in the next few minutes so we have time to discuss!
01/14/2013
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
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Originally posted by *Ashley*
**off topic here** Speaking of SexIs I'm not getting mine anymore.
The magazine is not printed anymore it's strictly online. Sexis
01/14/2013
Contributor: Loriandhubby Loriandhubby
Hello, i'm a bit late...
01/14/2013
Contributor: *Ashley* *Ashley*
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
The magazine is not printed anymore it's strictly online. Sexis
Well, that explains it. Thanks for the link.
01/14/2013
Contributor: SneakersAndPearls SneakersAndPearls
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Ok I'll begin this shin dig:

Champagne Dellarose knew that her parents were hopeless. Look at the name they had hung around her neck when she was too small to properly protest! With a last name like Dellarose ANY name was going to sound ... more
Cham turned away from the swiveling display. When she reached the deli line, all the other customers eyed her, then shifted slightly, but noticeably away from the invisible storm cloud gathering in her thoughts.

"I know what you mean," said a man behind her. "Romance novels, right? Sorry, I don't mean to pry. I saw you looking at the books. Your face hasn't changed since you left the rack."

Cham turned, prepared to tell the man to mind his own business, but stopped short. He was in his late 20's, dressed in a dark suit with a curiously bright yellow tie, black glasses, and polished shoes. His eyes were a slivery blue that stood out under his dark brow. This man that stood before her was clearly intelligent. She didn't know how she knew that, but something about him betrayed an easy personality with a mind that was always at work.

"It was one of my mother's books," she said. Easy, safe, unoffensive.

"Oh? Your mother reads those?" He raised his eyebrows.

Cham knew exactly what he was thinking. He was trying to size her up. How much of a catch could she be if her mother read romance novels?

"No, she writes them. That is, literally, one of her books." Cham immediately covered her face. She didn't want him thinking that her mother read those books, but writing them is so much better?

"Sometimes, they're quite good," the man said. "Sometimes they are a guilty pleasure of mine. Mind you, most of the time they are crap, but occasionally..." His voice trailed off and he waved his hand in the air.

"Does your wife mind you reading her books?"

"Not married. No girl friend, either, if that's your next question. Completely unattached."

Cham shifted her weight. "Are you hitting on me?"

"That depends," the man said. "Do you want to be hit on?"

"NEXT!" called the deli manager, and everyone moved up a step. Cham was silent for a minute, pretending to study the lunch meats before her turn came.

"I'm pretty sure they warned me against men like you in school," Cham muttered.

"'Never let school get in the way of your education.' Albert Einstein."

"Did you just quote Einstein to me?"

"Would you rather me quote Feynman?"

Cham's eyes went wide. She almost felt like her pupils dilated in awe of this man. "You know Feynman?"

"I do," he said. An easy, comfortable smile crossed his face. "Marshall. Marshall August," he said, holding out his hand. "Look, this is going to sound corny, and perhaps a little crazy, but there's something in you I like. Here's my card. It has my cell phone number. If you want to get together and talk more about Feynman and Einstein over, say, dinner...or coffee?..give me a call. No pressure."

Cham stared at the card. Wow, she thought. Just wow.
01/14/2013
Contributor: Lickable Lollie Lickable Lollie
His name is Drake Shepherd,
the love of my life.
I knew when I saw him
I'd soon be his wife.

He turned to me
with a gleam in his eye,
he put out his hand
and said "I'll be your guy."

I grabbed his hand
and he led me to the floor.
We dance all night,
but it felt like much more.

The feeling in my stomach
so amazing and strong.
Could he be the one
I've been searching for all along?
01/14/2013
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
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Originally posted by Loriandhubby
Hello, i'm a bit late...
Perfectly fine just pull up a chair and hit us with your creativity! LOL
01/14/2013
Contributor: SneakersAndPearls SneakersAndPearls
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Originally posted by SneakersAndPearls
Cham turned away from the swiveling display. When she reached the deli line, all the other customers eyed her, then shifted slightly, but noticeably away from the invisible storm cloud gathering in her thoughts.

"I know what you ... more
Ha! The meeting moved on while I was doing all that.
01/14/2013
Contributor: XxFallenAngelxX XxFallenAngelxX
I just made it. Hello everyone!
01/14/2013
Contributor: Lickable Lollie Lickable Lollie
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Originally posted by Lickable Lollie
His name is Drake Shepherd,
the love of my life.
I knew when I saw him
I'd soon be his wife.

He turned to me
with a gleam in his eye,
he put out his hand
and said "I'll be your guy."

I grabbed his ... more
That's the best I can do at the moment. Kinda distracted :S
01/14/2013
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
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Originally posted by SneakersAndPearls
Cham turned away from the swiveling display. When she reached the deli line, all the other customers eyed her, then shifted slightly, but noticeably away from the invisible storm cloud gathering in her thoughts.

"I know what you ... more
WOW is right!
01/14/2013
Contributor: SneakersAndPearls SneakersAndPearls
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
WOW is right!
Woman, please. Not exactly my best work.
01/14/2013
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
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Originally posted by Lickable Lollie
That's the best I can do at the moment. Kinda distracted :S
No that will do nicely! We can weave that into the story with no problem.
01/14/2013