I really like it. There was so much feeling and that can be hard to bring out in a poem but you did it.
#EdenLit - Club Meeting April 9, 2012 @ 7pm EST
04/09/2012
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Understandable. I cannot wait until you feel compelled to go over it again. It is so very emotional! You shared it perfectly to make the reader feel the conflicting emotion. Loved it.
Originally posted by
Destri
thanks. I think I ended it abruptly because it brought out all the emotion of his suicide again. I just wanted to stop writing.
04/09/2012
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Totally understandable. Sometimes we have to just end a writing piece abruptly or revisit later...there is something healing about writing isn't there?
Originally posted by
Destri
thanks. I think I ended it abruptly because it brought out all the emotion of his suicide again. I just wanted to stop writing.
04/09/2012
This is my first lit meeting, how do I participate more in the next one?
04/09/2012
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very. I have used writing to deal with hard emotions for many, many years
Originally posted by
Airen Wolf
Totally understandable. Sometimes we have to just end a writing piece abruptly or revisit later...there is something healing about writing isn't there?
04/09/2012
Ok guys lets get down the the new perspective we are looking at this month.
Third Person Narrative is probably the most flexible and widely used of all the perspectives. It is the perspective that is most familiar to readers and to beginning authors. Using this perspective can take refinement to remain fresh and exciting. To really stand out the third person perspective should be studied and understood mainly because it is so common!
Third Person Narrative is probably the most flexible and widely used of all the perspectives. It is the perspective that is most familiar to readers and to beginning authors. Using this perspective can take refinement to remain fresh and exciting. To really stand out the third person perspective should be studied and understood mainly because it is so common!
04/09/2012
When an author chooses to use third person perspective the characters are referred to as he, she, it, and they but never I, we or you.
Now keep in mind, that this means the narrator never refers to the characters as I, we or you, but the characters may refer to themselves and/or other characters using these words. In this perspective the narrator is a third person recounting the tale rather than being personally involved in it as it is unfolding.
The narrator keeps the continuity of the story going and introduces the scenes with information that the characters may not know or be privy to.
The narrator can convvey thoughts and feelings of the characters as the omniscient narrator or the narrator can know everything about the 'focal character(s)' but nothing about the others. Leaving the secondary characters as unknown or even unknowable can be tricky but can lend spice to the story and these characters are often the focal point of 'fan fiction' type writings. These secondary characters can be the focal point of spin off stories/books ashe author explores their motivations and desires.
Now keep in mind, that this means the narrator never refers to the characters as I, we or you, but the characters may refer to themselves and/or other characters using these words. In this perspective the narrator is a third person recounting the tale rather than being personally involved in it as it is unfolding.
The narrator keeps the continuity of the story going and introduces the scenes with information that the characters may not know or be privy to.
The narrator can convvey thoughts and feelings of the characters as the omniscient narrator or the narrator can know everything about the 'focal character(s)' but nothing about the others. Leaving the secondary characters as unknown or even unknowable can be tricky but can lend spice to the story and these characters are often the focal point of 'fan fiction' type writings. These secondary characters can be the focal point of spin off stories/books ashe author explores their motivations and desires.
04/09/2012
In the third person perspective the author/narrator can describe the thoughts and feelings of one or more of the characters in a subjective manner. On the other hand the author/narrator can let the characters think and speak for themselves in a more objective manner.
The author should remember that the narrator is needed to help the reader, who is essentially deaf and blind to the actions that are occurring. For example, if there is a rustle of a skirt that has meaning in the story then the narrator may need to step in and explain the significance or describe the sound more vividly.
The author should remember that the narrator is needed to help the reader, who is essentially deaf and blind to the actions that are occurring. For example, if there is a rustle of a skirt that has meaning in the story then the narrator may need to step in and explain the significance or describe the sound more vividly.
04/09/2012
The author can use third person narrative to delve into the thoughts, memories, feelings and motives of many characters showing the real complexities of a story and fleshing it out, so to speak. The author can have an omniscient narrator that knows the first person perspective of the characters but the author MUST be aware of when the change in voice occurs. This is a common mistake of new writers, in that they can see the whole picture but cannot decide how to begin describing it. The easiest way is to find a perspective and then stick to it!
04/09/2012
Any questions?
04/09/2012
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I am pretty sure I understand... I guess we'll find out when I submit my story! lol
Originally posted by
Airen Wolf
Any questions?
04/09/2012
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how do we submit a story?
Originally posted by
Airen Wolf
Any questions?
04/09/2012
Third person narrative is my favorite by far. I am excited for this.
04/09/2012
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Post it here in this forum and include the month that you are writing for...for example next month you are writing for May's meeting.
Originally posted by
Celtic Pixie
how do we submit a story?
I will be posting examples of how to header your post so that it remains on the top of the forum for ease.
Speaking of which I am going to give a short tutorial about how to organize the forum for easier navigation in a bit.
That's it!
04/09/2012
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me too. I love to tell a story... I relate third person to some of my favorite authors, like Tony Hillerman or Anne Rice. good storytellers.
Originally posted by
ScarletFox
Third person narrative is my favorite by far. I am excited for this.
04/09/2012
To conclude our first half of the meeting I am goint to award Destri the $25 gift card for her excellent example of pure second person perspective.
Now lets see.....we have a few new faces to award the second card to. Hmmmm how shall I decide? Randomly? Ok let's do that....the first new member of our club to post about how they loved the meeting tonight gets a $25 GC
Now lets see.....we have a few new faces to award the second card to. Hmmmm how shall I decide? Randomly? Ok let's do that....the first new member of our club to post about how they loved the meeting tonight gets a $25 GC
04/09/2012
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Woot! Thanks! I get something new... hummmm... what to get?
Originally posted by
Airen Wolf
To conclude our first half of the meeting I am goint to award Destri the $25 gift card for her excellent example of pure second person perspective.
Now lets see.....we have a few new faces to award the second card to. Hmmmm how shall I decide? ... more
Now lets see.....we have a few new faces to award the second card to. Hmmmm how shall I decide? ... more
To conclude our first half of the meeting I am goint to award Destri the $25 gift card for her excellent example of pure second person perspective.
Now lets see.....we have a few new faces to award the second card to. Hmmmm how shall I decide? Randomly? Ok let's do that....the first new member of our club to post about how they loved the meeting tonight gets a $25 GC less
Now lets see.....we have a few new faces to award the second card to. Hmmmm how shall I decide? Randomly? Ok let's do that....the first new member of our club to post about how they loved the meeting tonight gets a $25 GC less
04/09/2012
I loved the meeting it was my first and I cannot wait for the next one.
04/09/2012
I will be posting an assignment thread on the forum after the meeting detailing a recap of the meeting, a short form of the lesson and whatever topics we choose. I'll also include a tutorial of how to post for the club and how we award GCs.
04/09/2012
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HA! Here's our winner. LOL We love having new members.
Originally posted by
ScarletFox
I loved the meeting it was my first and I cannot wait for the next one.
04/09/2012
Yay ScarletFox! Congrats!
04/09/2012
Hey everyone! I know I've been kind of quiet tonight, but I've just watching the awesomeness unfold.
I wanted to ask for your feedback on the #Eden themes we've been doing.
Is it going well for you all? Did you find it difficult to write on the theme "Expressions of Love"?
I wanted to ask for your feedback on the #Eden themes we've been doing.
Is it going well for you all? Did you find it difficult to write on the theme "Expressions of Love"?
04/09/2012
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That was the easiest thing for me to write so far! I knew exactly what I wanted to say the second I saw the theme.
Originally posted by
Ansley
Hey everyone! I know I've been kind of quiet tonight, but I've just watching the awesomeness unfold.
I wanted to ask for your feedback on the #Eden themes we've been doing.
Is it going well for you all? Did you find it ... more
I wanted to ask for your feedback on the #Eden themes we've been doing.
Is it going well for you all? Did you find it ... more
Hey everyone! I know I've been kind of quiet tonight, but I've just watching the awesomeness unfold.
I wanted to ask for your feedback on the #Eden themes we've been doing.
Is it going well for you all? Did you find it difficult to write on the theme "Expressions of Love"? less
I wanted to ask for your feedback on the #Eden themes we've been doing.
Is it going well for you all? Did you find it difficult to write on the theme "Expressions of Love"? less
04/09/2012
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Very nice!!
Originally posted by
Destri
That was the easiest thing for me to write so far! I knew exactly what I wanted to say the second I saw the theme.
04/09/2012
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Thank you
Originally posted by
Destri
Yay ScarletFox! Congrats!
04/09/2012
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How long do we have to write about this theme or is it over for the Month?
Originally posted by
Ansley
Hey everyone! I know I've been kind of quiet tonight, but I've just watching the awesomeness unfold.
I wanted to ask for your feedback on the #Eden themes we've been doing.
Is it going well for you all? Did you find it ... more
I wanted to ask for your feedback on the #Eden themes we've been doing.
Is it going well for you all? Did you find it ... more
Hey everyone! I know I've been kind of quiet tonight, but I've just watching the awesomeness unfold.
I wanted to ask for your feedback on the #Eden themes we've been doing.
Is it going well for you all? Did you find it difficult to write on the theme "Expressions of Love"? less
I wanted to ask for your feedback on the #Eden themes we've been doing.
Is it going well for you all? Did you find it difficult to write on the theme "Expressions of Love"? less
04/09/2012
For those who are just joining or missed the meeting where we introduced this to everyone, Eden has monthly themes. We have spotlights on toys and concepts and we've invited Eden Lit to write pieces based on the theme. Pieces will be included in the Community Chronicle for showcase. It's a simple assignment and doesn't require too many mental tricks to get it down on paper, but we want it to be fun for everyone.
04/09/2012
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We'd also like to keep it enjoyable by all so the hard core erotica should stay with the club and softer romance for the Chronicle. Think sexy porn on Cinemax!
Originally posted by
Ansley
For those who are just joining or missed the meeting where we introduced this to everyone, Eden has monthly themes. We have spotlights on toys and concepts and we've invited Eden Lit to write pieces based on the theme. Pieces will be included in
...
more
For those who are just joining or missed the meeting where we introduced this to everyone, Eden has monthly themes. We have spotlights on toys and concepts and we've invited Eden Lit to write pieces based on the theme. Pieces will be included in the Community Chronicle for showcase. It's a simple assignment and doesn't require too many mental tricks to get it down on paper, but we want it to be fun for everyone.
less
04/09/2012
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#SexyYOU is over, but #ExpressLove continues until the end of April. On the featured discussions tab for the forums, you'll see sticky threads with the #ExpressLove hash tag.
Originally posted by
Airen Wolf
How long do we have to write about this theme or is it over for the Month?
Each week we roll out a new subtheme, so writers are free to write on the general concept or the specific subtheme. This week is Explore Together!
You can find that post here: link
04/09/2012
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Yes, thank you Airen!
Originally posted by
Airen Wolf
We'd also like to keep it enjoyable by all so the hard core erotica should stay with the club and softer romance for the Chronicle. Think sexy porn on Cinemax!
04/09/2012