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#EdenLit - Club Meeting April 9, 2012 @ 7pm EST

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Contributor: Destri Destri
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Originally posted by Mistress Dragon
Hello everyone good to be here and learn from you all.
Hi!
04/09/2012
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
Quote:
Originally posted by Mistress Dragon
Hello everyone good to be here and learn from you all.
Hey there sweetheart! Welcome welcome
04/09/2012
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
I am sad to see Woman China isn't able to be here today!
04/09/2012
Contributor: Destri Destri
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
I am sad to see Woman China isn't able to be here today!
yes, I was wondering if she would make it
04/09/2012
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
Let's move on to our five words category and I'll give you all the link to my work...it is apparently typed in wrong! Hell Night!
04/09/2012
Contributor: Mistress Dragon Mistress Dragon
I have never written anything but would like to try to make a story from one of my lovers and I having some fun. So I will start to read and learn here.
04/09/2012
Contributor: Destri Destri
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Let's move on to our five words category and I'll give you all the link to my work...it is apparently typed in wrong! Hell Night!
I got a real chuckle at the end of that one!
04/09/2012
Contributor: Hot 'N Sexy TexasMama Hot 'N Sexy TexasMama
just popping in for a quick hi
04/09/2012
Contributor: Destri Destri
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Originally posted by Hot 'N Sexy TexasMama
just popping in for a quick hi
Texas Mama! Hello! How are you???
04/09/2012
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
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Originally posted by Hot 'N Sexy TexasMama
just popping in for a quick hi
Hey there Mama! How are you doing? Back home and all right?
04/09/2012
Contributor: Hot 'N Sexy TexasMama Hot 'N Sexy TexasMama
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Originally posted by Destri
Texas Mama! Hello! How are you???
Alive...planning yet ANOTHER trip back to Maine as my dad isn't doing well (will FLY this time)...and my father-in-law passed away last week...so haven't had much time for Eden or writing..
04/09/2012
Contributor: Destri Destri
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Originally posted by Hot 'N Sexy TexasMama
Alive...planning yet ANOTHER trip back to Maine as my dad isn't doing well (will FLY this time)...and my father-in-law passed away last week...so haven't had much time for Eden or writing..
wow.... so sorry to hear all this! You have really had your trials lately.
04/09/2012
Contributor: Hot 'N Sexy TexasMama Hot 'N Sexy TexasMama
I just wanna say that I loved all the five word stories, etc. - they were great. I wanted to write one about my rabbits but ran out of time. I hope y'all do a category like that again!
04/09/2012
Contributor: ScarletFox ScarletFox
I enjoyed Hell Night, it gave me a giggle cause I think I have been in that situation before. Though my ending was never as nice.
04/09/2012
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
Ok so who LOVED Destri's poetry??? I thought it was fun, and well done!
04/09/2012
Contributor: Mistress Dragon Mistress Dragon
That was funny. Love it Airen
04/09/2012
Contributor: Destri Destri
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Ok so who LOVED Destri's poetry??? I thought it was fun, and well done!
Oh lordy, I am so embarrassed that I posted that. It is so dorky!
04/09/2012
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
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Originally posted by Hot 'N Sexy TexasMama
Alive...planning yet ANOTHER trip back to Maine as my dad isn't doing well (will FLY this time)...and my father-in-law passed away last week...so haven't had much time for Eden or writing..
OMG Mama I am so sorry to hear all this. My condolences and you go and take care of family and we'll be right here when you have time. You are in my prayers.
04/09/2012
Contributor: Hot 'N Sexy TexasMama Hot 'N Sexy TexasMama
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Ok so who LOVED Destri's poetry??? I thought it was fun, and well done!
It was a unique way to do that!

(heading back to supper - making BBQ chicken, mashed taters (NOT from the box) and broccoli....)

I will try hard to make next month's meeting and writing goals!
04/09/2012
Contributor: Ansley Ansley
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Originally posted by Hot 'N Sexy TexasMama
Alive...planning yet ANOTHER trip back to Maine as my dad isn't doing well (will FLY this time)...and my father-in-law passed away last week...so haven't had much time for Eden or writing..
I'm so sorry to hear that! My thoughts are with you!
04/09/2012
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
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Originally posted by Hot 'N Sexy TexasMama
I just wanna say that I loved all the five word stories, etc. - they were great. I wanted to write one about my rabbits but ran out of time. I hope y'all do a category like that again!
Count on it! We love to choose five unrelated words and write something about them
04/09/2012
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
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Originally posted by Destri
Oh lordy, I am so embarrassed that I posted that. It is so dorky!
I disagree! I think it showed your fun side after all the emotion you poured into the second person perspective piece!
04/09/2012
Contributor: Celtic Pixie Celtic Pixie
Hell Night is something that all of us can relate to. The imagery of you (how I see you) with a gun is awesome, at the end when you disclose it was your sister makes it funnier. Why is it called five words?
04/09/2012
Contributor: Destri Destri
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
I disagree! I think it showed your fun side after all the emotion you poured into the second person perspective piece!
I can be woefully silly... just ask my hubby!
04/09/2012
Contributor: Celtic Pixie Celtic Pixie
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Ok so who LOVED Destri's poetry??? I thought it was fun, and well done!
Destri, I really loved the work, it was compelling, it felt like I was the girl, but the end was so abrupt, it was almost as though you tacked it on harsh and cold, not descriptive or empathetic at all. More like a distasteful sum up to a beautiful story, I would have liked to read more of how this helped "you" "me" realize that it was the "gay" that was the crush, the comfort with self and the sexual soul recognizing another sexual soul. IT was beautiful.
04/09/2012
Contributor: Mistress Dragon Mistress Dragon
I think the poem was good it had some cool rhymes in it. Thank you for sharing Destri.
04/09/2012
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
I also think it made a great counterpoint to the lovely Ode to Eden that InterestingStuff wrote for our open topic. Ok did everyone else feel special and warm and fuzzy after reading 'Things That Go Vroom'?
04/09/2012
Contributor: Destri Destri
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Originally posted by Celtic Pixie
Destri, I really loved the work, it was compelling, it felt like I was the girl, but the end was so abrupt, it was almost as though you tacked it on harsh and cold, not descriptive or empathetic at all. More like a distasteful sum up to a beautiful ... more
thanks. I think I ended it abruptly because it brought out all the emotion of his suicide again. I just wanted to stop writing.
04/09/2012
Contributor: Destri Destri
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
I also think it made a great counterpoint to the lovely Ode to Eden that InterestingStuff wrote for our open topic. Ok did everyone else feel special and warm and fuzzy after reading 'Things That Go Vroom'?
Oh yeah, a real homage to both love and EF!
04/09/2012
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
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Originally posted by Celtic Pixie
Hell Night is something that all of us can relate to. The imagery of you (how I see you) with a gun is awesome, at the end when you disclose it was your sister makes it funnier. Why is it called five words?
Hey there Celtic Pixie! It is Five Words because we had a list of five words:
*A party
*A vase of Flowers
*Chocolate covered bugs
*A Broom
*Someone who gets poked!
04/09/2012