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#EdenLit - Club Meeting-June 11, 2012 @ 7pm EST

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Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
Hey there and welcome!

This Month our topics were:
*Character Development
*Dildos in Wonderland
*Open Topic

Here are the links to the stories:
PassionateLover2 Fantasy Times Two
ScarletFox Getting His Attention
Airen Wolf I've Fallen
Airen Wolf When A Loved Toy Dies
If any late posters want their work discussed in this meeting please post a link to your work in the comments of this thread. If there is time we will discuss the work!
If you are an avid reader then be sure to leave a comment or two on each of the stories you read to give our writers some encouragement!

This Month we will be doing a short grammar review...yes it will be short and sweet, before we get into the meat and potatoes of dialogue writing.
We will talk a bit more about Character Development as well and possibly offer the same topic this Month since no one seemed to want to tackle that topic!

There are two $25 Gift Cards up for grabs, so see ya there!
06/11/2012
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Contributor: Cedarlooman Cedarlooman
I did't get any writing done. I will try and pop in for the meeting a little bit, but have dinner cooking now and will be eating when it starts. Maybe during bath time I will be able to hop in. Cheers to all and good job to those who DID get some writing done!
06/11/2012
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
I think everyone was busy this Month. I know it was a monster for me! At any rate drop in cause we are going to discuss some grammar snafus and then character development leading up to writing dialogue! Should be fun.
06/11/2012
Contributor: Ansley Ansley
Pizza is reheating in the oven and I'm ready!
06/11/2012
Contributor: Ansley Ansley
Oooh and we have a perfect storm brewing. *rubs hands together maniacally* Lovely weather to discuss writing!
06/11/2012
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
Welcome to the June 2012 Meeting of the Eden Lit Writers Club!!
Hey there! How is everyone? Are you enjoying the warm and stuff? Last night was wild and wooly for us. massive thunderstorms knocked over my daughter's massive tomato plants and the peppers as well. Luckily we container garden so no major damage was done. We lost one promising pepper but it is ripening on the window sill and the green tomatoes? Can you say YUMM?

So no one felt brave enough to tackle the character development exercise! I admit to being intimidated by it as well. Shall we see if we can break it into some more manageable bite sized pieces? I think it's a great exercise but we might need some discussion about how to go about fleshing out a character before we tackle it again.
06/11/2012
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
Good job PassionateLover2 on the Eden themed fantasy!! That was an amazing read.
06/11/2012
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
I loved ScarletFox's Getting His Attention. I wonder though if it was drawn from personal experience or was pure fantasy!
06/11/2012
Contributor: Ansley Ansley
Anybody out there?? Man, May and June...can't keep people in doors.

I admit I just simply didn't have time to write anything, but isn't that every writer's excuse?
06/11/2012
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
Quote:
Originally posted by Ansley
Anybody out there?? Man, May and June...can't keep people in doors.

I admit I just simply didn't have time to write anything, but isn't that every writer's excuse?
I does seem to be...it is hard to sit down when the sun is shining and the birds are singing...
06/11/2012
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
Short sweet and to the point, eh?
06/11/2012
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
It wasn't a terribly easy month for me to write...seems like everything I did had a depressed sort of feeling to it. Hell even my toy died! LOL
06/11/2012
Contributor: Ansley Ansley
Quote:
Originally posted by Airen Wolf
It wasn't a terribly easy month for me to write...seems like everything I did had a depressed sort of feeling to it. Hell even my toy died! LOL
LOLOL May was just spinning down a blackhole. Too much to do, too little time. So, let's just chit chat and we can hold the fort down to see if anyone remembers.
06/11/2012
Contributor: ScarletFox ScarletFox
Ack I am here! I was a little caught up in Game of Thrones.
06/11/2012
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
Quote:
Originally posted by ScarletFox
Ack I am here! I was a little caught up in Game of Thrones.
Ahhhh welcome welcome!!
06/11/2012
Contributor: ScarletFox ScarletFox
As for what I wrote, it was certainly fantasy. Both myself and the boyfriend have been a little up to our ears to do anything more then snuggle until we both pass out lately. So it did have a little inspiration from my current thoughts.
06/11/2012
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
It looks like the lure of the warm weather has taken our regulars away...that and health concerns. I did like your work though Scarletfox. It was creative and very uplifting, I thought. I love a woman who doesn't just sit and whine but goes out and gets what she wants.
06/11/2012
Contributor: Ansley Ansley
Quote:
Originally posted by Airen Wolf
It looks like the lure of the warm weather has taken our regulars away...that and health concerns. I did like your work though Scarletfox. It was creative and very uplifting, I thought. I love a woman who doesn't just sit and whine but goes out ... more
Always a plus! Whiny women...can be difficult.
06/11/2012
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
Quote:
Originally posted by ScarletFox
As for what I wrote, it was certainly fantasy. Both myself and the boyfriend have been a little up to our ears to do anything more then snuggle until we both pass out lately. So it did have a little inspiration from my current thoughts.
Perhaps a little inspiration fairy alighted on your computer and gave you a wonderful way to entice your poor tired honey?
06/11/2012
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
I think this must have been a very busy Month for everyone! I am looking forward to hearing all about it when the frantic activity dies down a bit.
06/11/2012
Contributor: ScarletFox ScarletFox
Quote:
Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Perhaps a little inspiration fairy alighted on your computer and gave you a wonderful way to entice your poor tired honey?
Oh yes it has Hopefully I will get to put it to use in the 5 days off I have coming up.
06/11/2012
Contributor: Antipova Antipova
Oh, today already? I am here, hooray!
06/11/2012
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
Quote:
Originally posted by Antipova
Oh, today already? I am here, hooray!
Hey there! We have all but given up. Welcome welcome
06/11/2012
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
Quote:
Originally posted by ScarletFox
Oh yes it has Hopefully I will get to put it to use in the 5 days off I have coming up.
Whoa all that pent up energy? Could be explosive! I know it is in our household!
06/11/2012
Contributor: Cedarlooman Cedarlooman
I am peeking in for just a few minutes. Read and posted comments on the stories. The were nice and short and easy to read quickly. I had a toy story popping around a little but have been gone every weekend for a month aand it is my peak training season where I relly try to pish to prepare fore my races and other things.
06/11/2012
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
The weather is just toooooo nice and everyone seems way busy this Month. How about you Antipova? Congrats on being in the spotlight this Month!
06/11/2012
Contributor: Antipova Antipova
Do we have topics for next month? I'm working on a review right now but I might get some just-for-fun writing in after that...
06/11/2012
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
Quote:
Originally posted by Cedarlooman
I am peeking in for just a few minutes. Read and posted comments on the stories. The were nice and short and easy to read quickly. I had a toy story popping around a little but have been gone every weekend for a month aand it is my peak training ... more
S'ok everyone is busy just now!
06/11/2012
Contributor: Antipova Antipova
Quote:
Originally posted by Airen Wolf
The weather is just toooooo nice and everyone seems way busy this Month. How about you Antipova? Congrats on being in the spotlight this Month!
You too! High five!

I don't know if I've been "busy" so much as "climbing emotional mountains," but I'm confident it will all come out for the best shortly, and then I'll be just plain "busy" again
06/11/2012
Contributor: Cedarlooman Cedarlooman
Quote:
Originally posted by Airen Wolf
It wasn't a terribly easy month for me to write...seems like everything I did had a depressed sort of feeling to it. Hell even my toy died! LOL
I definitely noticed the depressed tone! I even commented a little about the cruelty in the last few lines of your poem.
06/11/2012