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Thank you very much! I was never quite satisfied with the flow in Fairy Tale Lust. I tried to balance the contemporary and historical stories along with the darker and lighter tones (and then throw in first and third person), but there are places where it fell a little off. On the other hand, I think I succeeded in getting the flow right in Dream Lover. There were threads of details or background elements that just seemed to carry over from one story to the next giving a kind of organic cohesion. (My opinion, of course!) It was as much luck as skill, to be honest!
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Alys
Well, as an oftentimes overly linear thinker, I appreciate all the effort you put into it!