Your review has a fairly negative tone and isn't very filled out... What was it made out of? What are the dimensions? Is it soft/hard? Taste? You say it smelled bad, did that go away? What did you try to fix it?

Most of the information you are asking for can be found in the overview.

And you can't really do anything to change the smell. It is made of jelly, so you can't do anything other than wipe it down with toy cleaner. The smell has yet to go away, although it isn't as strong as it was when I first got it.

Thanks for the review

Too bad about the smell. There's nothing worse

I'm glad to see that you're responding to comments. It's a good start to a review, and yes, it's true that most of it can be found in an overview, but it doesn't hurt to mention it again in your own review. Most readers are more likely to check out the review then read the specs.

Since it's a vibrator, really, the biggest thing you're missing on this information is about the vibrations. I know you said the controls were at the bottom, but how were the vibrations? What speeds were they? Was each individual setting loud or soft?

I understand sterilized wipes can be very useful, but not all toy owners have them. I'd really love to see you add something about other additional ways the toy could be cleaned. I know I don't own any wipes.

What about the design? I know you told us what it looked like, but there's a ledge that's obviously for clitoral stimulation. Did it work like it was supposed to? Did it go okay with your anatomy? Did it enhance or not?

You also said the packaging was cheap and tawdry. Those are both pretty broad adjectives. I'd really love to know exactly what was on the packaging. "Cheap and tawdry" doesn't leave me with a very good mental picture.

Also, you gave it two stars. From what you've said in the review, I understand it had a smell, didn't provide g-spot orgasms, and had bad packaging and control placement. Are those the things that made you give it two stars? And if so, why would you recommend it to beginners if this is such a bad toy?

It's a great start to a review - more details would help though. You could look at other reviews to see the type of details that will really make your review "pop".

Thanks for the review

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thanks for the review

Thank you for the review!

thanks for review!

thanks