First Lingerie Review and needing opinions!!!

Contributor: SexyySarah SexyySarah
Okay, so I just did my first lingerie review on here and it is rated so far at "useful", which I'm not complaining about, but I'm curious if anyone has any suggestions on how to make it "extremely useful" review? That's usually what I get when doing my toy reviews, but I usually can go into a lot of detail on a toy, but when it comes to lingerie what do people want to know? Do I need more detail? I usually use the extended form, but you can't when you review lingerie, so I'm curious what I need to do to improve it? Here's the link link

Thanks for any comments, I'm not trying to increase my views/ratings/votes, I'm really looking for feedback so when I write another one on lingerie I can do better, and possibly go back in and edit the current one.
09/16/2010
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Contributor: ToyTimeTim ToyTimeTim
It seems to me it is all in the details, like trying to describe something to someone over the phone. Does the stockings have elastic tops or reinforced toes? How about the pantys, does it have a liner? Does it fit right/comfy?

As much as I do not like to make a really long review, I think that with lingerie there is so much you need to talk about that they just need more info to get every thing in there.

For my last one I asked one of the other reviewers to kinda proof read it for me, this helped getting in some things that I did not think of and make sure it read well.

Just my thoughts.
09/16/2010
Contributor: SexyySarah SexyySarah
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Originally posted by ToyTimeTim
It seems to me it is all in the details, like trying to describe something to someone over the phone. Does the stockings have elastic tops or reinforced toes? How about the pantys, does it have a liner? Does it fit right/comfy?

As much as I ... more
Those are great suggestions, it's what I need! Thanks!
09/16/2010