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Contributor: sbremer sbremer
I've just written a new review (it hasn't been posted yet) and I would really love some advice on how to write better reviews. Thanks, all.

Syds
03/04/2010
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Contributor: Jill Ingoff Jill Ingoff
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Originally posted by sbremer
I've just written a new review (it hasn't been posted yet) and I would really love some advice on how to write better reviews. Thanks, all.

Syds
hey there! I always refer back to this old thread for advice :o) Reviewer Advice Good luck!
03/06/2010
Contributor: sbremer sbremer
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Originally posted by Jill Ingoff
hey there! I always refer back to this old thread for advice :o) Reviewer Advice Good luck!
Thanks!
03/06/2010
Contributor: Sir Sir
Your latest review is actually excellent. I suggest going back and editing your first two reviews and improving those, then allowing me to give you a critique as I will be able to see some things that may still need improvement.
03/06/2010