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Contributor: Maiden Maiden
I'm Maiden, and I'd like to introduce myself. I'm new to EF and would really like to make some friends and get more into the reviewing process. What a better way to hit two birds with one stone?

So I'd like to say hello and ask for any tips on the reviewing process and getting upgraded. I've written a few reviews and will be working on a few more in the next few days. I welcome any critiques, good or bad. Thanks for your time!

I look forward to talking with you all!!!!
08/27/2009
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Contributor: Oggins Oggins
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Originally posted by Maiden
I'm Maiden, and I'd like to introduce myself. I'm new to EF and would really like to make some friends and get more into the reviewing process. What a better way to hit two birds with one stone?

So I'd like to say hello and ... more
Welcome to the community! I haven't read any of your reviews yet but when I do, I'll let you know if I have any advice. =)
08/27/2009
Contributor: Maiden Maiden
Thanks!!!
08/27/2009
Contributor: spicywife spicywife
Welcome to the community!
08/27/2009
Contributor: spicywife spicywife
Quote:
Originally posted by Maiden
I'm Maiden, and I'd like to introduce myself. I'm new to EF and would really like to make some friends and get more into the reviewing process. What a better way to hit two birds with one stone?

So I'd like to say hello and ... more
Have you applied for an upgrade yet? You aren't currently on the list.
08/27/2009
Contributor: Maiden Maiden
I did after I wrote my first two reviews, and I don't think I got any votes. I'll be writing a new one soon and applying again. I'm trying to be a bit more active and introduce myself to everyone. I have spent all day reading reviews and updating my wish list. I can't help it, it's very addictive to look through all this site has to offer!
08/27/2009
Contributor: spicywife spicywife
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Originally posted by Maiden
I did after I wrote my first two reviews, and I don't think I got any votes. I'll be writing a new one soon and applying again. I'm trying to be a bit more active and introduce myself to everyone. I have spent all day reading reviews and ... more
It is addictive!
08/27/2009
Contributor: Maiden Maiden
I've gotten some amazing feedback so far! Thanks a bunch for your time.
Keep it coming you all, I need all the help I can get! I'm really having a lot of fun with this site so far, and would love to become an advanced reviewer. I gotta write some more reviews though, and try to get the votes this time! lol
08/27/2009
Contributor: Gary Gary
Hello Maiden, welcome to the community!

As far as all these comments on addiction go, we would like to officially say "no comment"
08/27/2009
Contributor: Maiden Maiden
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Originally posted by Gary
Hello Maiden, welcome to the community!

As far as all these comments on addiction go, we would like to officially say "no comment"
Hello, Gary.... I've been reading some of your reviews today!
Thanks for the welcome!

I have always been addicted to sex and sex toys, but I never had an outlet like this before....

I think I'm in trouble.... lol
08/27/2009
Contributor: Maiden Maiden
Of course, I will say this for people who don't get the sarcasm....

I'm not REALLY an addict.... my obsession doesn't control my life or take up THAT much of my time. Not as of yet, anyway... lol
08/27/2009
Contributor: spicywife spicywife
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Originally posted by Maiden
Of course, I will say this for people who don't get the sarcasm....

I'm not REALLY an addict.... my obsession doesn't control my life or take up THAT much of my time. Not as of yet, anyway... lol
Sure, sure.. the first step is admitting that you have a problem though.

Just kidding. We all know it's fun to read these reviews and such, but hopefully no one is taking it to the extent that that's ALL they
08/27/2009
Contributor: spicywife spicywife
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Originally posted by spicywife
Sure, sure.. the first step is admitting that you have a problem though.

Just kidding. We all know it's fun to read these reviews and such, but hopefully no one is taking it to the extent that that's ALL they
"that that's ALL they do"
08/27/2009
Contributor: Maiden Maiden
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Originally posted by spicywife
"that that's ALL they do"
I understood the first time...lol

Yeah, I guess I'm still in denial...
08/27/2009
Contributor: Maiden Maiden
Well, I'm up for advancement again!

Maybe some of my new friends will cast their vote for me! *wink*wink*nudge*nudge *
08/27/2009
Contributor: Maiden Maiden
YAY!!!!

That only took 12 minutes this time! I'm in! Thanks all who voted for me, as well as all of you who welcomed me, commented on my reviews, and gave me advice. I won't let you down!
08/27/2009
Contributor: Maiden Maiden
Okay, so this is the last time I'm going to bump this I swear!!!

I'm not generally an attention whore, but I do have something to add.

I took some advice and edited my reviews a little bit. I took out some of the graphic sexual stuff, but lots remain. It's who I am, I can't help it. I hope it doesn't take away too much from my reviews. Also, I have a new one up. Hope you like it!
08/28/2009
Contributor: Victoria Victoria
Welcome to the community, Maiden! I think it's great that you are asking for advice - just remember to still be true to yourself. While it is important to mention all of the details about a product in your reviews (and you should do this), it is also important that you use your own voice. Unique flavor and insight is what makes the review interesting to read. I hope finding that balance is fun and rewarding for you!
08/28/2009
Contributor: Maiden Maiden
Thank you! I will definitely be using my own voice, but I did understand that some of the parts of my first reviews were down right "Penthouse"! lol
Upon rereading them, I decided to delete some stuff that had nothing to do with the product or how we enjoyed them specifically. I just tend to get excited while writing the reviews and I get a little worked up at times.
08/28/2009
Contributor: Jimbo Jones Jimbo Jones
You got in so fast this time that I didn't have time to vote. Nice job and welcome to being an advanced reviewer. Looking forward to more reviews from you.
08/28/2009
Contributor: spicywife spicywife
I would have voted for you but I wasn't aware that you applied. Great job!
08/28/2009
Contributor: Maiden Maiden
Thanks you all! I feel giddy, like I've just been asked to sit at the cool table in high school! lol ( like I ever wanted to be there anyway...)

Seriously, thanks for all the support. I'm looking forward to doing more reviews!
08/29/2009
Contributor: Maiden Maiden
My first assignment's review has been published! Tell me what you think!
09/11/2009