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#Workshop - Nov. 30th @7pm: "Writer's block" and "Follow-ups - any gravy left in that toy?"

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Contributor: El-Jaro El-Jaro
I found some articles on writing reviews that could work with Eden with a bit of tweeking.

How to overcome writers block

How To: Write a product review

and another...

This one is from Self Starters weekly
11/30/2011
Contributor: Hot 'N Sexy TexasMama Hot 'N Sexy TexasMama
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Originally posted by unfulfilled
Hotandsexytexasmama you'll do great with being assigned video reviews and yoiu'll hit 6.0 in no time; you're reviews are excellent and if others haven't read them they need to.
Really? Are my video reviews ok? I love doing them - but not sure if others like them and keeping them around 3 minutes is so hard.
11/30/2011
Contributor: Rarity Rarity
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Originally posted by El-Jaro
For video reviews, I'd suggest looking up Viktor's porn reviews.

Scene by scene, shot by shot isn't always needed.
Thanks for the suggestion! I don't believe I've come across Viktor's porn reviews yet.
11/30/2011
Contributor: Starkiller87 Starkiller87
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Originally posted by Antipova
Well basically... it's actually an anatomy book, though
Flexibility!
11/30/2011
Contributor: Antipova Antipova
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Originally posted by Hot 'N Sexy TexasMama
Which ones have more of an angle - a comparison between the head "styles" (like is one more pronounced than the others)....veins, etc.
Good thoughts, thanks!
11/30/2011
Contributor: wrmbreze wrmbreze
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Originally posted by Willow Wand
Oh man, I was just assigned 2 porns today and after I checked out, I started sweating, I have NO IDEA how to write a porn review! Last porn I bought was on VHS. I mean, don't get me wrong, I'm excited, just scared. I'll have to read ... more
I did mine in like 8 or 9 scenes and then my experience with it, I believe.
11/30/2011
Contributor: Kindred Kindred
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Originally posted by Antipova
Wow, this meeting's going really fast.

I have another writer's block question, and maybe it's something you guys can help me with.

I'm doing a comparison set of reviews for all the kinds of dual density silicone (I ... more
How soft is the outer, how firm is the core, how thick are the layers, how much drag with each type, how flexible is the dildo, How easy/difficult to insert, since most are larger-how well do they stand up or are they floppy/droopy...
11/30/2011
Contributor: aliceinthehole aliceinthehole
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Originally posted by Beck
Too cute


aw this makes me miss my kitties. hoping to work from home soon so i dont have to miss out on them 40+ hours a week. i sincerely ache for them when i'm gone from them! it's awful.
11/30/2011
Contributor: Hot 'N Sexy TexasMama Hot 'N Sexy TexasMama
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Originally posted by Antipova
Good thoughts, thanks!
Check out some of Gunsmoke's reviews of his Vixskin stuff - where he'll compare a couple of dildos.
11/30/2011
Contributor: aliceinthehole aliceinthehole
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Originally posted by Antipova
Wow, this meeting's going really fast.

I have another writer's block question, and maybe it's something you guys can help me with.

I'm doing a comparison set of reviews for all the kinds of dual density silicone (I ... more
hmm.. sterilization rules on each of them... how squishy they are compared to, say the muscle part of your thigh...
11/30/2011
Contributor: Beck Beck
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Originally posted by aliceinthehole
aw this makes me miss my kitties. hoping to work from home soon so i dont have to miss out on them 40+ hours a week. i sincerely ache for them when i'm gone from them! it's awful.
I am lucky enough to get to be home all day with mine. I have one on my lap checking out EF right now.
11/30/2011
Contributor: wrmbreze wrmbreze
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Originally posted by Rarity
Thanks for the suggestion! I don't believe I've come across Viktor's porn reviews yet.
me either, must look for them.
11/30/2011
Contributor: El-Jaro El-Jaro
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Originally posted by Rarity
Thanks for the suggestion! I don't believe I've come across Viktor's porn reviews yet.
Here is his profile
11/30/2011
Contributor: aliceinthehole aliceinthehole
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Originally posted by Rarity
Kitty cat loves you!



I love cats with two different coloured eyes, they are so precious.
meeep! i luff him.
11/30/2011
Contributor: Rarity Rarity
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Originally posted by Beck
Oh for lingerie and DVD's I try to come up with a huge list of questions you would want to know. Then answer those, then work on putting together in a review.

For DVD's I do that by scene, all the same questions about each scene. Then ... more
That sounds like a really great way to go about writing reviews.

I'll have to find some time to sit down and do some brainstorming!
11/30/2011
Contributor: SexyTabby SexyTabby
hi everyone I'm really late but wanted to see this one tonight.
11/30/2011
Contributor: Kindred Kindred
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Originally posted by Beck
I am lucky enough to get to be home all day with mine. I have one on my lap checking out EF right now.
Yeah, I was reading quickly and totally thought you were talking about a dildo in your lap...
11/30/2011
Contributor: Antipova Antipova
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Originally posted by Kindred
How soft is the outer, how firm is the core, how thick are the layers, how much drag with each type, how flexible is the dildo, How easy/difficult to insert, since most are larger-how well do they stand up or are they floppy/droopy...
The first three I have planned already---I was going to do some comparison squishes with the VIP and with a SuperSoft dildo.

Drag is a really good thought that I hadn't come up with, though---great one! Floppiness is very important to me too
11/30/2011
Contributor: Hot 'N Sexy TexasMama Hot 'N Sexy TexasMama
Y'all are gonna think I'm crazy here - but here goes. When I have writer's block - a lot of times its cause my desk is messy and I can't lay the toy down on the desk so I can keep looking at it and holding it and listening to it and feeling it as it vibrates.

So my #1 step with writer's block is cleaning my desk.

My #2 is getting something to drink - coffee or water or whatever.

Just my .02
11/30/2011
Contributor: Kindred Kindred
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Originally posted by SexyTabby
hi everyone I'm really late but wanted to see this one tonight.
Heya!
11/30/2011
Contributor: El-Jaro El-Jaro
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Originally posted by SexyTabby
hi everyone I'm really late but wanted to see this one tonight.
Howdy!

long time no see! Hope things are groovy for you!
11/30/2011
Contributor: aliceinthehole aliceinthehole
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Originally posted by Hot 'N Sexy TexasMama
Really? Are my video reviews ok? I love doing them - but not sure if others like them and keeping them around 3 minutes is so hard.
it doesn't have to be around 3 minutes. i've uploaded a couple at 5 or just above with no complaints. sometimes you need more time!
11/30/2011
Contributor: Antipova Antipova
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Originally posted by aliceinthehole
hmm.. sterilization rules on each of them... how squishy they are compared to, say the muscle part of your thigh...
Ooh, that's a neat comparison idea too.

And yes, Gunsmoke has great comparison reviews!
11/30/2011
Contributor: Willow Wand Willow Wand
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Originally posted by Kindred
Yeah, I was reading quickly and totally thought you were talking about a dildo in your lap...
Are you saying there is something WRONG with that? >.> *looks at her lap*
11/30/2011
Contributor: Hot 'N Sexy TexasMama Hot 'N Sexy TexasMama
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Originally posted by Rarity
That sounds like a really great way to go about writing reviews.

I'll have to find some time to sit down and do some brainstorming!
I love RedBoxBaby's video reviews - you might want to look at hers to see how she does it.
11/30/2011
Contributor: Beck Beck
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Originally posted by Kindred
Yeah, I was reading quickly and totally thought you were talking about a dildo in your lap...
Haha, no but it is sitting on the table next to me. The Blue swirl I just got.
11/30/2011
Contributor: El-Jaro El-Jaro
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Originally posted by Hot 'N Sexy TexasMama
Y'all are gonna think I'm crazy here - but here goes. When I have writer's block - a lot of times its cause my desk is messy and I can't lay the toy down on the desk so I can keep looking at it and holding it and listening to it and ... more
Good ideas!

messy desk --> messy thoughts
11/30/2011
Contributor: Antipova Antipova
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Originally posted by SexyTabby
hi everyone I'm really late but wanted to see this one tonight.
Hey Tabby!
11/30/2011
Contributor: wrmbreze wrmbreze
link and link Can you guys look at my dvd reviews and tell me what you think when you have a min?
11/30/2011
Contributor: Starkiller87 Starkiller87
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Originally posted by aliceinthehole
it doesn't have to be around 3 minutes. i've uploaded a couple at 5 or just above with no complaints. sometimes you need more time!
I wish everyones videos were as entertaining as yours.
11/30/2011