May's meeting was intense and the discussion about our writer's work was informative and, as usual, kind. We are moving to make our critiques much more helpful toward actually improving our writing.
Lickable Lollie won the $25 Gift Card for her Little Spoon. It was such a close battle though because Scarlet Fox also wrote an equally amazing piece called Material. Good Job guys!
Also mentioned was Celtic Pixie's Frustration which was unfortunately missed in the weekly round up before the meeting as it was posted as an post to Scarlet Fox's "Material".
Be sure to start your own forum, here in this category, using the formula: #EdenLit-(month.year)- topic-title to be sure your piece gets some commentary and doesn't get overlooked!
The lesson this Month was long, intense and involved. I will include a transcript of the lesson as the first post to this forum! This way it can be perused without searching through the meeting to find it. There was some discussion in the meeting so it's worth a look see.
Our topics this Month are:
*Character Development-This Month's lesson topic is as challenging as the lesson is! The idea is to assume you have passed on and a loved one is writing a Eulogy of sorts about your life. Develop the two characters as detailed as you can and choose a narrative, for example: Epistolary Narrative seems to fit well! Dig as deep as you can to totally flesh out your characters as this is actually the focus of the exercise. Remember to keep tenses correct as this could be rather challenging especially if your passed on character is actually listening to the reading of the letter, ect. The person who writes the best character development will win a $25 gift card from EdenFantasys!
*Dildos in Wonderland- What would your toys say if they could talk? Would they write a review about you??!!?? A fun piece about the all important user of toys.
*Open Topic- Like usual this is your chance to write about whatever interests you.
Kake has volunteered to lead a discussion all about writing Haiku poetry and maybe even a few other stylings! Stay tuned for more details....
I will be beginning a basic look at grammar in the coming Month with a lead into dialogue development. There's so many rules to proper dialogue writing that it just makes sense to start with grammar. I know, I know, I hear the groaning but I will make it as painless as possible. Maybe after we discuss dialogue writing we can work on some screen writing. Why, yes that IS the golden carrot dangling before your twitching nose!
The Eden Theme for the entire month of May is: "Set the Mood for Vroom:" How do you set the scene to use toys either for yourself in a solo session or with a partner. Any funny mishaps while introducing toys for the first time? Any shocked, jugmental/reactionary responses to revealing your love of toys?
Weekly topic-Brighten Her Mood: What is something someone special did for you that totally turned a really bad day into a really good day?
You have plenty of time, at least until June 10, 2012, to get it published in the Monthly Chronicle. It doesn't have to be polished, it doesn't have to be anywhere near perfect. Remember to use hashtag #TheMood-#EdenLit-titl e
Now on to the lesson and questions:
Lickable Lollie won the $25 Gift Card for her Little Spoon. It was such a close battle though because Scarlet Fox also wrote an equally amazing piece called Material. Good Job guys!
Also mentioned was Celtic Pixie's Frustration which was unfortunately missed in the weekly round up before the meeting as it was posted as an post to Scarlet Fox's "Material".
Be sure to start your own forum, here in this category, using the formula: #EdenLit-(month.year)- topic-title to be sure your piece gets some commentary and doesn't get overlooked!
The lesson this Month was long, intense and involved. I will include a transcript of the lesson as the first post to this forum! This way it can be perused without searching through the meeting to find it. There was some discussion in the meeting so it's worth a look see.
Our topics this Month are:
*Character Development-This Month's lesson topic is as challenging as the lesson is! The idea is to assume you have passed on and a loved one is writing a Eulogy of sorts about your life. Develop the two characters as detailed as you can and choose a narrative, for example: Epistolary Narrative seems to fit well! Dig as deep as you can to totally flesh out your characters as this is actually the focus of the exercise. Remember to keep tenses correct as this could be rather challenging especially if your passed on character is actually listening to the reading of the letter, ect. The person who writes the best character development will win a $25 gift card from EdenFantasys!
*Dildos in Wonderland- What would your toys say if they could talk? Would they write a review about you??!!?? A fun piece about the all important user of toys.
*Open Topic- Like usual this is your chance to write about whatever interests you.
Kake has volunteered to lead a discussion all about writing Haiku poetry and maybe even a few other stylings! Stay tuned for more details....
I will be beginning a basic look at grammar in the coming Month with a lead into dialogue development. There's so many rules to proper dialogue writing that it just makes sense to start with grammar. I know, I know, I hear the groaning but I will make it as painless as possible. Maybe after we discuss dialogue writing we can work on some screen writing. Why, yes that IS the golden carrot dangling before your twitching nose!
The Eden Theme for the entire month of May is: "Set the Mood for Vroom:" How do you set the scene to use toys either for yourself in a solo session or with a partner. Any funny mishaps while introducing toys for the first time? Any shocked, jugmental/reactionary responses to revealing your love of toys?
Weekly topic-Brighten Her Mood: What is something someone special did for you that totally turned a really bad day into a really good day?
You have plenty of time, at least until June 10, 2012, to get it published in the Monthly Chronicle. It doesn't have to be polished, it doesn't have to be anywhere near perfect. Remember to use hashtag #TheMood-#EdenLit-titl e
Now on to the lesson and questions: