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#EdenLit - July2012 Poetry: Little Star

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Contributor: ScarletFox ScarletFox
My little star
My only light
The bit of sanity in my world
To warm to touch
To precious to keep
Burned I am again by you
I gravitate towards you
Rotate around you
You are the center
The light
The soul giver of life
My friend
My torturer
My of all, my love
Little star
In the sky
In my eyes
Worth a world of unseen wrath
Paid in tears
Sung silently at night
As I wonder what you are
And if I can trade a dimond for you
Little star
Where are you?
So red and bright
Full of life
Anger, suppressed love
Only light
Only love
Will you burst
Will you flame
Kill us all
Its all the same
Little star
Little love
That’s all I want
And you take from me
As if you where a black hole
And I to feed on
Feed on my heart almost gone
Only light
Sucking dry
I hope, I pray
You make me cry
Little star
Little
Star past the clouds
Unto you
So beautiful
Magnificent
My inspiration
My pain
My regret, and reason to live
My love
My…
Little star
07/26/2012
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Contributor: Cedarlooman Cedarlooman
Interesting. I like how it comes back with the occasional rhyme and the loop back and slight references to twinkle, twinkle buried within.
07/26/2012
Contributor: laroc nite (Tina) laroc nite (Tina)
interesting
07/26/2012
Contributor: Izzaba Izzaba
Quote:
Originally posted by ScarletFox
My little star
My only light
The bit of sanity in my world
To warm to touch
To precious to keep
Burned I am again by you
I gravitate towards you
Rotate around you
You are the center
The light
The soul giver of life
My ... more
I like you work very nice.
07/26/2012
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
Very simple but deceptive in it's simplicity. It's like there are reams more words to say but you can't, quite, squeeze them out. I like the dynamic tension.
07/26/2012
Contributor: amberf83 amberf83
nice
07/26/2012
Contributor: amberf83 amberf83
nice
07/26/2012
Contributor: Logan Logan
cute
07/28/2012
Contributor: Spankinsweet Spankinsweet
I love this! May I ask what are you referring to as "little star"?
07/30/2012
Contributor: Woman China Woman China
Quote:
Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Very simple but deceptive in it's simplicity. It's like there are reams more words to say but you can't, quite, squeeze them out. I like the dynamic tension.
I agree with Airen Wolf.

It's very elegant yet deceptive in the simplicity of tone.

I didn't find it familiar to twinkle twinkle little star, I found it similar to that other childhood rhyme about hope and future and protecting the child for some reason.

I liked it.
07/30/2012